Wow I just read this dr the first time, it's really great I hope you continue!

more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

OMG...I can't believe I'm going to say this, but I'm pretty sure I hate Bella. I mean, your Mom declaring her distaste for you must be undeniably painful but get a grip. Seriously.

I'm pretty sure that she is a self- absorbed asshole.

Wow. I know she is disillusioned, but it seems to me that she is way out of line.

Right now I think she is the bigger tool.

yay!

I'm gonna say that I love the story line, and theory behind the story and it would make a great read. However, I can't read any more of it because of the vegetarian part. As a person in the agriculture industry that has studied the issue greatly there is nothing that irritates me more than vegetarians. The human body is designed to eat meat, we need the proteins provided in it and cannot function effectively without said proteins. And it is not cruel to eat meat, it is not inhumane to eat meat.

Love this story! And I miss it a lot. Will it be continued?

omg i'm gonna implode if they don't fuck already

Gahh! Please finish this story! It's sooooooo good!

nm,

anyway you will do an epiloge?

Oh hun... I'm so sad to see you haven't updated in over a year. I trully hope it's not because you've lost interest in your story - because I certainly haven't!

Being a Christian myself,I'm always cautious of reading fics where religion is mentioned. But you? You do it with such grace that it blows my mind!

You've captured Edward's morals and beliefs do beautifully that I'm actually convinced of it. There is nothing forced or self- righteous about it. It's just fantastically written and you should be sooo proud!

Where Bella's opinions and beliefs are concerned,you've made her so open minded and endearing that one could actually believe that their relationship could work in spite of their differences.

Your fic is one of increadible insight. It's delicate,yet raw. It's human! And because of that,it's just perfectly beautiful in it's disfunctionality (is that even a word? lol).

Thank you for sharing. If you ever decide to finish (which I trully hope you do),I'll be ready and waiting.

Love...

xoxo

I got my BA in poly sci! This story totally takes me back lol. I was Edward in a So Cal university full of Bella's, but it was so much fun to debate. I'm really looking forward to reading this :)