Love it! Snark and fluff, a perfect balance for a great story :)

I absolutely loved it!

Love it!

there's gonna be more right?

:)

l-o-v-e i-t!-!-!

Very very interesting Chapter. Keep smiling. :-)

Ooh I liked this. You've caught my interest. I loved the dialogue between them..and the wit! :D

I'm hoping you continue this. Quite intriguing and funny.

Very cute! I'd love to read more! Look forward to another chapter! Perhaps some fluff in the storeroom? Or a quick shag against the shelves? ;p LOL! very funny so far.

I thought this was great. Really good balance of humour, UST and snark. I never thought that 'sorting my Potions storage room' could sound quite so euphemistic!

Good job. I can hardly wait for more.

oh please write more ]

this was really good!

xx

I love it!

This was absolutely adorable! I really loved how you didn't make Snape out to be some sort of super model, and stayed true to his character. Great job.

That was great!