Wow... Please continue with the writing... I love this fanfic!

This is so funny! You obviously cant write for **! I hate you and i wish you would go die! I hope xThatsWhatSheSaidx die aswell! I hope she stays in that damn coma forever! Ha the stupid ** is gonna die!

This is so funny! You obviously cant write for **! I hate you and i wish you would go die! I hope xThatsWhatSheSaidx die aswell! I hope she stays in that damn coma forever! Ha the stupid ** is gonna die!

This is so funny! You obviously cant write for **! I hate you and i wish you would go die! I hope xThatsWhatSheSaidx die aswell! I hope she stays in that damn coma forever! Ha the stupid ** is gonna die!

This is so funny! You obviously cant write for **! I hate you and i wish you would go die! I hope xThatsWhatSheSaidx die aswell! I hope she stays in that damn coma forever! Ha the stupid ** is gonna die!

This is so funny! You obviously cant write for **! I hate you and i wish you would go die! I hope xThatsWhatSheSaidx die aswell! I hope she stays in that damn coma forever! Ha the stupid ** is gonna die!

I love it! You're an amazing writer.
I really can't wait for the next chapter!

<3
Adelaide Ferdinand on Nox :)

wow! your story is really good.
its kind of a bit too close to the original at the beginning of the story, but it is slowly getting away from that, which i think is good. i mean, i know the whole thing is going to, partially, be alot like twilight, but i think that it is good to show that you can write that high standard of writing as well.
i love the whole mystery thing with Raina, its really hooked me onto the story, and i hope you will update soon! hmm, what is raina... well hehe, i think that she is a selkie... or maybe thats what you want us to think...
um, towards the parts where alice acts 'weird' it might be good to have an alice POV, although it could be hard. i just think that it would be good to have some idea to what alice was thinking, maybe not all of her thoughts, just enough to make your readers jump to their own conclusions and then, BAM! you can surprise them... lol, just suggestions.
great work, hope you are well and update soon,
craizypet

OMG. i am so sorry that i havent read and reviewed your story like i said that i would! it has been so caotic (spelling?). i am reading it now, it is at the top of my list. gtg, reading to do, and i promise i will review!

hope you are well
craizypet

Okay, I've finished my homework; I can now read with abandon! Don't be surprised if you don't get a review for every chapter; I'll be flying through them :). One thing I noticed in this chapter is that you've been spelling and using the word "albeit" wrong. Since it means "even if," you don't have to put "if" before it. Like, "It was only a face - albeit a pretty one to gaze at." Aside from that, it's perfect! I can't wait to read more.

Hey, remember me? I finally got around to starting this fic and I'm so sorry I did! It's almost physically painful to tear myself from my computer now! The first thing that I noticed is that you have a very clear writing style. After reading dozens of badly written, grammatically incorrect stories on this site, it pleases me immensely to come across one like this. Also, I like that Raina has her own story to tell; she isn't just an empty character you constructed to retell Edward and Bella's story. I can guarantee you that while I'm doing my homework, I'll be simultaneously sneaking back to this story ;).

i loved the story so far cannot wait for next update

in answer to Raina's last question: He wants to eat your soul with a side of Bella! lol sorry I couldn't help myself! I really really like your story thank you so much for Sagesting it to me! I can't wait to read more! well I can wait as I have to untill you post a new chapter and I also have to head to work soon. I love the fact you have tried (and for the most part) remained faithful to the book! I wonder if Raina is a Wolf...or at the very least a Shifter.

Confused at the moment

Hi! I have this saved, but it's getting too late for me to read or write a good review, I promise I will tomorrow. Oddly enough, I lost my best friend to a freak horseback riding accident when I was 14...so yep, you've got my attention. I'm sorry. I'll be back here soon. LIke 12 hours...Thanks so much for contacting me. I love to read. Best- Natty