Oh. Very nice...UPDATE SOON!

Hey i am new 2 this fanfiction stuff but i got 2 say your story is so good i love it but i dont like Hinata's father he is a jerk

Aw that was so cute! <3 I love the naruhina you threw in there ^_^ And I think you should do 25 chapies... mainly cause this fanfic is freakin awesome and I want as much as I can get of it. I mean really now in days you can almost never find a good tenten neji fanfic... it's very angering ah well can't wait for the update!

I think Haishi won't be getting that contract anytime soon

Update soon ^_^

Hmm, Hiashi doesn't seem like he regrets anything. Tenten should also get lessons in royal language, as it is wy different than the normal language used by commoners.

haha we had flan instead of pumpkin pie...
I DONT KNOW xD hehe but wow, wuts up hiashi's buttocks? meh, and hinata and naruto!! cute ^^ please update when you can :D

LOVE! ! !

UPDATE! ! !

YAY! Naruto and Hinata finally meet X)! Great chapter, the drama was good and it was cool how they all told him off! And the endig was good as well;)

WOW. That was a nice romance... ^.^ Heh... =D :) Happy late Thanksgiving... AND UPDATE!! Need more of those sweet romance moments!! =D

-Chirisaa Tomoko-x0x0

yay naruhina! though i really dont like hiashi.sad that this is going to end soon. yay im a sexy nejiten fan.hmm the chapter was good i dont think there were any mistakes. umm i guess thats all.

Intense. But I wasn't into it as much as I wish I was but oh well.

And I bite my nails too. haha.

Chika H.~

Umm, six times? (sneezing)

I hope he doesn't dies. ;.;

Chika H.~

:( poor tenten! i would've been so scared too!!

update soon!!

YOUR GRAMMER NEEDS WORK.

YOU USE THE WORD 'SUDDENLY' MUCH TO OFTEN.

AND YOU NEED TO BE A BIT MORE REALISTIC ABOUT THE CHARACTER'S FEELINGS.

DON'T MOVE THE PLOT TOO FAST OR THE STORY WILL SOUND TOO FAKE.

OTHER THEN THAT, I LIKED IT.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!