I love FFT, love DelitaxRamza (both so underrated and hard to find and love this story! You captured the essence of their relationship well IMO, with Ramza being the only one treating Delita as an equal etc. And I can so imagine everything like this, with Ramza being all naive etc. I also like the darker side of it, that it's not just a cute fluffy fic (though that would be nice too, but this fits them better) and of course the dialogues! X)

*Swoon* Adding to the fact that this is the first DR in damn near years, it's insanely IC. I love how they still talk appropo to the times. lots of people have trouble with that. Man, this is so good.

Aww, poor Ramza. Delita is such a bastard. But I like the fic. It's cute in a darkish way. I'm glad to find someone who likes DelitaxRamza, even as this non-fluffy level.
Kudos to you.

Teehee! That came out rather nicely! Thanx for the props. Now to say what I wanted to say yesterday...

Excellent, simply excellent! A wonderful twist on their relationship and general interactions, both past and present. You portrayed Delita very well and showed Ramza's spoiled life to the greatest extent.

Bravo!