Wow been awhile since you updated, I hope to see a new chapter, I like the story, well written. Subscribing I am.

great

please rite some more

you're eally good at getting OC reactions and stuff right. but you need to woork on eradicating large paragraphs of dialouge, it makes people want to skip that part. add inturruption, questions and stuff to make it more involing.

Nice.

Naruto as a samurai? That's new.

I don't really get the last part...


Would that mean not using the katana would let you pass the samurai code?

Well, what about defending yourself when the unarmed enemy attacks and 'accidentally' cutting his fist when he tries to punch you, or 'accidentally' removing his foot when he tries to kick you? You're not breaking the samurai code...

good story so far, got my attention and interest to read more. I hope you update soon, things were just starting to get interesting.

I like your fic and look forward to reading your next chapter.

please update someday please

A very good look at Naruto's upbringing, seeing some visible clues as to his state of mind, and the pet responsibilities should add a lot to his character. A bit slow, but these looked like building chapters, so it works. Keep up the good work and until next time.

well a little more action...

...boring chapter, nothing interesting. When are we going to get into the Naruto action >.> been 8 freaking chapters now.

Interesting update, I was surprised that you found time to write two chapters. Most other writers I've been reading from ususually only had one, so you've really outdone yourself in my opinion. Though I love how you've had Naruto, Kurenai, and Asuma develop; along with everyone else at the Fire Temple, I didn't feel completely comfortable. It was mostly with Kurenai's lack of progress in her career as a kunoichi and genjutsu mistress.

I know this is an AU, and your version of her made the decision willingly to put her career on hold, but you could at least show a scene or two that have her training. Perhaps having Naruto come across her at those moments and question her about what she's doing. This way, she develops her skills as both a mother and ninja, explaining to him what her prefered field is and teaching him to counter genjutsu. After all, I'm sure that despite his training his control will get any better, or good enough to cast genjutsu. (Maybe good enough for a few D to an even fewer C-Rank ; but not that good.)

Plus, she is still a kunoichi, couldn't you've had her at least become Yanahi's personal bodyguard; with the Damiyo doing it for both protection and appearences' sake. After all, both she and their grandson will need protection when he's away and the majority of the Fire Guards are out with him.

But, I digress too much into this...

Besides that, I love how your story's going and can't wait to see how five year old Naruto will interact with the Hokage after so long not seeing each other. Not to mention "Inu's" reaction to seeing him, and how he might feel about this. Will he see his late sensei's son, or a reminder to the loss of a man he considered a second father? I guess myself and everyone else will have to wait and see.

For now, great job on your story, so keep up the great work; until the next time, later.

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Loved it, after reading the first chapter I just couldn't stop myself from reading all seven chapters in one sitting. Took me the better part of the day, but almost everyone I know, at the moment, were still suffering the effects of too much celebrating the new year. However, reading this story in my off time was, as far as I'm concerned, one of the best ways to enjoy said day. Can't wait to see how little Naruto will react to meeting his 'daddy' for the first time, at least from his prospective. Plus, will Naruto's stay at the Fire Temple allow him to grow into the samuari portion of the title's story? If so, I can't wait how this will lead to Naruto meeting Temari for the first time, and what hers reaction, and every other ninja he'll meet in the future, will be to meeting a samurai-ninja.

Damn do you write one hellva a story, and though it felt like it repeated itself a few times in some of the chapters, I did not care one bit. That did not stop me from reading on and finding out how Naruto's new life is turning out with Kurenai and Asuma as Naruto's parents. Making them, along with Ibiki, as Kushina Uzumaki's genin team was smart; and adding Anko later one after Orochimaru's betrayal altogether genius. Can't wait to see what else you've got in store for the later updates. However, take your time writing, as all good things take time to be created, and breaks to celebrate the holiday's with family are necessary; as well as restful. So, until the next update, enjoy life and write whenever inspiration comes to you. Until then, later.

what do yu thing about naruto smoking like asuma when he's older but he tries to hide it to kurenai?anyway update soon