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SkywardShadow 12/3/08 . chapter 7
Ah, crap. Those last 2 reviews from DFMS were from me; I accidentally logged in on DeathMax-kun's account. That's embarrassing.
Anywayz, great work. Again. XD
DeathFruitsMaximumSecrets 12/3/08 . chapter 7
O_O

Never mind! New favorite!-sob- Poor Near! This sounds so innocent and lonely and..just...fantastic. Glorious work.
DeathFruitsMaximumSecrets 12/3/08 . chapter 6
Relax already! The shortness only adds to the power-trust me, k? _

Gah, this one might just be my favorite so far. Mello seems very Mello-ish, and his letter to Matt was so sweet.
I loved it!
CoH13 12/1/08 . chapter 5
and i enjoyed reading it!
it was good :D

i liked it ;P

when i did this one, i got confused cuz i didnt really know how to draw "seeking solace" xD lol...

awesome job! :3
SkywardShadow 12/1/08 . chapter 5
Again-aw!

Short and very sweet. Just...adorable. I loved it!

And don't worry about length! They're good; that's all that matters. XD
SkywardShadow 12/1/08 . chapter 4
Aww! So flipping cute!

And true...wow, that's actually profound if you think about it...

Off to review the next chapter!
SkywardShadow 11/30/08 . chapter 3
It was not bad!

I for one loved it. Morbid, bittersweet, succinct and true.

Nice one.
Sassy Lil Scorpio 11/30/08 . chapter 3
I like how Light got his name. That was very creative. It showed how much his father and his mother loved him so much already. I also think it's interesting how we go through his life hearing his name and what follows aftewards. Nice how you ended it with the part where Near calling Light Yagami on the fact that he's Kira. Great job.

Just one thing...and this is something I notice you've done in all the chapters. You put your work down saying it's bad and that you're sorry it's short. Just write as best you can and take your time. Do't put your work down, because if you don't believe in it, who will? I really think you've taken quite a task to write about Death Note based on 100 themes. It's really great, and so jubet believe in your work. It's good and if I have concrit I'll be sure to say so.
Sassy Lil Scorpio 11/30/08 . chapter 2
Very good chapter about love. The love in Death Note is really in-depth. There's Gelus' and Rem's love for Misa, there's Misa's love for Light, and what Misa thinks Light's "love" for her (really, manipulation). It was very good, and it's sad to see how hard Misa fought to have Light, when really, he didn't care for her at all, although she cared very much for him. Very good work. I especially like how you detail all the work that Misa did to get in contact with Light out of her love for him..and how she mistook his actions to be "love" on her behalf. Rem truly loved her, and so did Gelus.
Sassy Lil Scorpio 11/30/08 . chapter 1
Great job on the first theme "Introduction". You explain so much of what Death Note is about with this short and sweet introduction. I really like the paragraph that beings with "Kira", discusses the other characters, and ends on how Ryuk went back to the shinigami world satisfied. It's very chilling to see how the whole thing plays out, but again, this is just an intro, and what an intro it is. Great job and I look forward to reading more!
SkywardShadow 11/16/08 . chapter 2
Whoa, that was really good. Ii love how you describe Misa; the ending was great. I particularly loved the final three lines.
2 down, 98 more to enjoy! Nice one!
shinigami girl 11/16/08 . chapter 2
wow these r truly beautiful chapters. can't wait for the others
SkywardShadow 11/15/08 . chapter 1
'Wasn't good'? Are you kidding? This was great! I loved it! A thoroughly enjoyable read.
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