I love your story! I can't wait till the next update!

People are getting set into their character profiles now. Tansei's bad and power hungry, check, Yanagi just needs to get up to speed. I just noticed that Yanagi is a lot like Ino, at least as far as girly tendencies go. Looking forward to the next one. Peace.

Now the conflict with Tansei comes out. I like how you gave his actions a bit of a backstory. I feel like I can sympathize with him a bit, but still shake my head at him. Sora's new 'guardian' role makes me more interested in what he does, especially since it reflects onto Kita. "Yanagi's fashion advice," lol. Looking forward to the next one. Peace.

Bleh, Tansei! Sora gets a lot more screen time now, which I'm glad for, and we also get to see into his thoughts on things. Before there seemed to be more focus on Yanagi, but I think I like it better this way. It makes a bit more sense. Looking forward to the next one. Peace.

Well, I once read TTA, back in the day I myself was frequently updating my own, "Naruto" fics, granted at some point I got a little upset with it. But when I came across this re-write I got somewhat interested, coz I liked the concept in the original. Or perhaps I'm hoping this time around you'll change some of the events to fit the Naruto world better? Either way, I'm curious how this'll turn out.
I see some changes in the beginning... for example I don't recall you mentioning Hissori and Minami being in the same teams before, nor Benkei being their jounin instructor (btw, Benkeino sounded better IMO)... I guess with that their team is complete, unless you changed Rusoto's past.
I also see you're giving Bara a bigger role... well, I didn't care much for her in the original version (she seemed like a background character anyway), but I think the one here I might grew to like.
Hissori on the other hand seems darker... I don't recall him having such depresive thoughts about his daughter... it feels strange seeing him like that. Naturally it's not like he's bad now, just less... positive, I suppose.
ANd I see Hana... I mean Hisae made a depute (then again, most Iwa gennin-to-be appeared in TTA's first chapter)... she really does resemble Hinata in many ways.
Overall it's quite a nice start, although a bit too 'book-like' for a manga-based story for my tastes. I am intrigued as to what will be changed, heck I'm hoping some of the characters from the original will be somewhat changed (like giving Jieichou some, more skill) and in other cases I'm hoping for a triumphic return (Araiki most specifically, since he was my personal favorite and it really bugged me he just disappeared after the exams... then again that ending with him meeting that girl affilated with one of his teammates... forgot which one... was nice).
Well, I'll be dropping by to check more of this in the near future, so I suppose you can expect more reviews from me.
Good luck with future chapters.

Nice chapter^^ I'm still a little bit confused on Sora's binding necklace thingy though, but I can deal. LOL I'm glad Kita's their other teammate, too; good for Sora! But I hope Tansei and Hisae aren't on the same team--unless you work out a happy ending >.< Ehh...update soon, please, so we can find out~

-Yume

So that's what Sora did. I was concerned in the last chapter about what he was planning on doing, but that makes sense. I am interested to see if the conflict between Tansei and Hisae is different in this story than it was in the other one. I like what you're doing with this story so far. I think it's going to be a lot better than the original story and it's very interesting to read.

I don't like bringing up errors in stories that I read because it makes me feel nitpicky, but in this chapter when Hisae was referring to Tansei she called him "Tansei-nee-san" and she should have said "Tansei-nii-san". "Nee-san" implies that she is talking about an older sister, not an older brother.

Yay for updates! We're getting to the Tansei Hisae problem now huh, and the beginnings of Team Omega are back in action. Looking forward to the next one. Peace.

I can't wait for you to update! THis is awesome!

Yep. I am liking this. This is officailly a lot better than your old fic. A lot of the characters are different, especailly Kita's father. Instead of being the 'I love you no matter what' parent (which a lot of people do most of the time. Nothing is wrong with that, it's just been done a lot) he was conflicted, which made sense since the demons in the Naruto-verse were hated no matter what. At least in Naruto's and Garra case anyway.

Onto random things...

Every time I think of Sora, I think of Kingdom Hearts :).

Are they going to be in teams soon? Will they meet of canon cast and other OC's in your previous fic?

update when you can.

Woah, freaky ending... I wonder what Sora did to Kita? But I hope that they all become more comfortable together soon (expecially on Kita's part). And...seems like something's leading up to the grass by the waterfall...

Well, update soon, please! I'm dying to find out...

-Meika

What!? What!? What's going on? Sneakity snakes, what's happened to Kita? She's moving back into society. I like Sora's reintroduction to her. It kinda makes more sense this way, and gives them a closer friend bond.

The re-write is going so well, and it feels different from the original. It's interesting to see it in a changed form, but I think I like it better now. It's more mature maybe? Or it flows and doesn't jump into events as quickly as the other? Who knows, but I enjoy it. Peace.

Are we going to find out what is wrong with Kita in a later chapter? It makes me curious. I thought it was interesting to see how Kita was thinking in this chapter and see what she has been doing. Tansei seems a lot nicer in this story. I'm sorry if my review seems kind of weird. I had one all planned out in my head when I pressed the button, but as soon as the box popped up, I lost all of my thoughts like I do when I try to write or draw. Darn. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Great job with the chapter. I liked the changes you made to Rosuto and it was interesting to see more of Sora's sister. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.