that was awesome i loved it hope you write more really soon

Heya

I love this story. I hope Jasper's okay and whats with Quil and Alice not seeing her future.

Please Update Soon!

This is a really good story! I hope you update again soon

I just recently began reading this story and I am offically hooked and can not wait for the next update - it is an amazing story and very well written so keep up the good work :)

Love the story so far! Keep Writing!

Ohh I hope nothing happens to Jasper...and whats with Quil? I wonder has he got a crush! I can't wait for more, I really want to find out what happens.:)

Great chapter trust Alice to be preocupied with wedding stuff instead of being worried about the fight!

It's great how Jasper didn't freak out just because she went to La Push like Edward would. While Edwards and Bellas relationship is full of drama, Amandas and Jaspers is easy-going like a good relationship should be. She also believes in him and helps him get over the bloodlust when her Grandmother cut herself.

Ah they are so cute! Oh I hate Amanda's aunt...bitch! Anyway just wanted to let you know this is great and very interesting.

This is a great oc story, I love learning more about Jasper through stories...he is my favourite character and I don't think SM developed him enough. I also like how Rose isn't being a total cow to Amanda.

I am officially hooked onto your story, it's so good! I love the humor in everything. Please update soon!

love it!

more please!

:)

I finally got an account to review your story!

I really admire your characterization and plot. Well done!

Keep and eye out for my upcoming stories.

aw love the ending "Alice made me" i literally burst out laughing... i mean she SO would... god love alice... love the love/tension about the battle between her and jasper... wonderful writing, update soon!

Luci

I'm glad you started writting this again, I love it! :)