Nee-san . . . WRITE MORE NOW!! I finally got around to reading this!! YOU WRITE MORE!! RAWR! BlueMouse says she will attack you until you write more. Including clinging with teeth.

Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE!:)

wah!
I liked this fiction very very much! ^_^
please ubdate soon...
I want to know how did she know finn..

dude this is so interesting plz write more. Oh and who is Finn? i hope you will write more soon.

plz update soon i wanna know whats next love ur story its awsome! ^_^

this was a great chappter!~
but wasnt that an ...overeaction to a peanut butter and jelly sandwitch?~

great chappy though!~

'~'Pinkblossom^~^

Continue this story!

I just started reading this and it is AWESOME! :) There are a few grammar and spelling errors. And you keep changing the tense so that it makes it a little confusing to read. What I mean is that you write that something with 'is' which is present tense, and then you write 'had' which is past tense. It's confusing, but I LOVE the plot of this story! :)

ITS FABULOUS,THERE'S NOTHING ELSE I CAN SAY!FANTASTIC IMAGINATION!

Great story...simply superb...now,let me ask you-WHERE'S THE NEXT!?Haha:)

Yay! Best part - reunion! Is there a chance thhat Aoi will show or maybe even Iori or Alisa?

Okay. This chapter was alright. It wasn't great. You have some problems with subject-verb matching, which you should try to fix, and things like that, but otherwise, it was okay.

ooh finn~~ i havent been following the manga but i know some about finn~

great chapter~ its great that they all got together~

love always
hisanachan

Great chapter, keep up the great work! It sux that updates are goin' to be slow but I understand. I'll be looking forward to the next one!

why doesn't hikari know finn? they were friends in the manga, right?