Wow.. Nice job. I think it was a good story. :)

This is such a piece of shit. I don't know why I'm even reviewing this sucks. All u do is use the movie dialouge an type in your 'thoughts' really, where's the creativity? this is as original as what you can find in the toilet. this is some bullshit

I like the idea, maybe you could write another thing like this except from Jack' pov? That would be totally awesome!

CCV

interesting i like how u put it good work