That was really great to read and I`m looking forward to what comes next. ;] I really like the idea of Julian not remembering Jenny and his feelings for her. And the new game starting up again, ahah. I'm really liking it so far and I'm so glad there are other FG fans out there! So excited for this story~

Update soon. (:

heart.angel.

Quite frankly,

Your writing is actually artful. An art, literary in this sense, is the one thing that doesn't make a person feel like one's reading a girl/boy's simple guilt trip into the imagination.

Artful in a sense that you paint a picture, and it has a finished quality to it. I can't pin it down exactly, but that's how your work pretty much is. Kudos :)

(& trust me I've read like, all the forbidden game drafts)

What a yummy story! Well done on this =D can't wait to read more. . . Update soon!

I thought you had abandoned this... I missed reading more about your story. It's full of mystery and it speaks so much without using so many words. It's amazing. I can't wait to read what happens if Jenny can't find his memories... and it wouldn't hurt to see more interactions of those two.

Thank you for this story.

...you've got Twisted Julian perfect. Really! I think I should try write him twisted too sometime, instead of just malicious, or evil, or angry, or whatever. Your the first person who has made me change my mind about Julian (about having him picked over Tom, I mean) because he really is very... twisted. LOL. Good work :)

Such a distracting opponent. I do so wonder what will happen when/if he remembers. Will he feel betrayed? I suppose he could feel betrayed by any number of things. His death, this new life, the new darkness in her that he finds enthralling now but which the old Julian might have only found disgusting. I am interested in seeing where this goes. Nice update. Well-written as always.

After everything they've been through, and it all comes back to another GAME?!

Please don't torture me, and just let them be together. Let Jenny get over her funk and let Julian finally remember. Happily Ever After, The End. :D

Mother freaking GOD! U r so beyond awesome! U held me captive in yr fanfic! UPDATE OR i WILL kill u! Hurry! Ur story is filled with AWESOMENESS!

update soon! it is a REALLY GOOD FANFIC SO DON'T LEAVE ME HANGIN'!

Am I the only one who finds Julian kind of sweet this time around? Nice update. I enjoyed the changes in tone from Julian's perspective to Jenny's. It shows how despite all her changes she's still basically the same person, and how much more complex Julian's view of the world is.

Jenny seemed a little crazy at the end of the chapter, but other than that, this was a really good chapter!

hooray! update!
I LOVED it. Even if it was a bit short to my liking. But it was GOOD. Now I'm crossing fingers and hoping you update very soon :)

Finally we get Jenny's POV! I can't wait to see how this game plays out, and how can she recover his memories... or even if she wants to. I bet they are going to be bittersweet. What is Julian thinking? Maybe he has some inkling about his past feeling for Jenny?

I can't wait to read the next chapter, please don't abandon this beautiful story. And thank you for sharing this with us.

You had me crying... some parts of this fic are so sad. I couldn't help the tears that they brought. I imagine what Jenny must feel. How resigned and sad... how she just wastes away while trying to repent for her own sins (in her mind).

I can't wait to read the next chapter. I believe Julian and Jenny are going to discover so much in the Game... I love your story, I find it intriguing and great.

poor jenny felt so bad for her. Loved how it ended back at the start was awsome.
Maria