 Sinah 2009-11-03 . chapter 8 Crazy good story you've got here. Please keep updating.
You have a new fan! |
 herrp 2009-09-05 . chapter 8 yay, please updat asap, this story keeps getting better and better |
 inertbiscuit 2009-08-31 . chapter 7The manner you describe scenes and build tension is great, a very riveting tale. Such dire odds, and enjoyed reading this assassin team. You keep the adreanaline pumping, and I cannot wait to read more. |
 Nitroglycerin 2009-08-31 . chapter 7Picturing that last scene, with Jet skidding along the roofs while holding Chang, then coming in through the window... made of awesome. Epic awesome.
But now I wonder, what DOES Jet know that the others don't? How did this all start? What warning did they get?
That thought... probably something to do with Ivan, since he was with Jet at the beginning (but died T-T), plus the telepathy... which may well have played a vital role in the warning... hmm... |
 Twillightfairy 2009-08-15 . chapter 6What comes next? I got hooked and now there's nothing there, please update soon. |
 serpentslayer 2009-05-17 . chapter 6Sweet so far. =) Can't wait to read more. |
 JJ Rust 2009-01-15 . chapter 4Another good one. You do a solid job bringing out the suspense in this story. |
 Tamashi Aisuto 2009-01-12 . chapter 4W.O.W |
 JJ Rust 2009-01-08 . chapter 3Cool chapter. You captured the cyborg's personalities well. Excellent part where GB got captured. Grenade slipped into his hand. Classic. |
 Tamashi Aisuto 2009-01-04 . chapter 3Wow. U rally gotta continue. |
 Blackmoon72 2008-12-21 . chapter 3 This is awesome! Thanks for posting! |
 Kaiya's Watergarden 2008-12-21 . chapter 3omg can't wait for the next chapter keep it up |
 Kaiya's Watergarden 2008-12-18 . chapter 2omg i really like this story plz update soon can't wait to see what happens next |
 JJ Rust 2008-12-15 . chapter 2Good chapter. This story doesn't drag. Sounds like you've given the Cyborgs a heck of a good opponent to battle in this. Just one typo I caught. "They're tried to warn him" when it should be "They tried to warn him."
Other than that, enjoyable story. |
 marleypup14 2008-12-07 . chapter 2This is a very good story! I hope you continue it! |