 ArtificialRed 2009-10-26 . chapter 8A great chapter! The flowerman's reaction to Winry made me think of my favorite quote from the movie Tombstone. "You're no daisy! You're no daisy at all!" Lol. Go Winry! |
 kaykayy 2009-10-25 . chapter 8Oh, the suspense!
Can't wait for the next update! |
 WamprickNyx 2009-10-24 . chapter 8Wow! Bad-guy-kicker!Winry, eh? Go Winry go!
Ahem, ahem. Sorry for not reviewing before, I had to deal with exams. School TOTALLY sucks. Boarding schools suck even more. But that's not important. What's important is that you posted a new chapter, and awesome as always, either. I liked Al's reactions very very much.
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Edward hadn’t taken Winry to the library, had he? Again? "Brother, even you aren’t that much of an idiot, are you?"
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If Alphonse could have widened his eyes in surprise, he would have. There was evidence Ed had used a handkerchief to shine his boots.
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This last part was hilarious as well. Really, I can't imagine Ed shining his boots... or can I? *bursts into laughter*
I'm really worried about Win and Ed now. Ed's unconscious, their hands are tied. The bad guy is a psycopath who thinks of people as flowers(at least Winry scared him now...) Yep, creepy and very intriguing. I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. Keep going! |
 TheoreticallyEva 2009-10-23 . chapter 8If you don't mind, I'm going to beg and plead that you continue this one soon. It has me wrapped around its little finger.
Also, by this point, I have read most of the Fullmetal Alchemist fan fiction you've posted, and they have caused me heartbreak and elation in turns. Your talent sticks out around here. You have convinced me; I shall have to keep an eye on you. ;) :D
I hope to comment more another time. Thank you so much for sharing your talents! :D |
 ArAshiMitArAshi 2009-10-22 . chapter 8You go, girl! (I'd like to see Winry as the hero here rather than Edward)
P/S: The kidnapper is very creepy. |
 Flitter-Flutter 2009-10-21 . chapter 8Go Winry!! That's right, kick him!! Kick him good!! Mwa ha ha ha ha!!
Yeah, Winry was awesome in this chapter. She needs awards now. Unfortunately, she and Edward are still caught, and Ed's suddenly fallen unconscious...Get yourself and Ed out of there, Winry! Do something! GAA!!
This guy doesn't seem as menacing now, if he's frightened by someone who's tied up and can't really do anything...
I hope Winry doesn't bring more trouble down on her and Ed's heads by her defiance...(bites nails)
Wow...
Anyway, I love your writing. :D |
 obsidianlight 2009-10-21 . chapter 8The guy is really over-obsessive with his 'flowers'...it's almost creepy.. |
 ArtificialRed 2009-09-29 . chapter 7Evil cliffhanger... |
 ArAshiMitArAshi 2009-09-26 . chapter 7Oh, this is so good! I love how you keep Ed, Winry and Al IC, add a bit of fluff and mystery in this story! I can't wait for you to update ^^ |
 Megsaku 2009-09-26 . chapter 7-gasp- ^^ Awesome chapter! It took awhile for you to update. But the chapter was still great as usual. Great job! |
 obsidianlight 2009-09-25 . chapter 7haha...the part where Ed wrote Mustang's name on the bill was rather funny...Roy is most probably going to get back at him for this=p and poor Ed...hope he's alright...after all that beating he took at the end of the chapter..
looking forward to the next chapter=) |
 Manhattan-y 2009-09-25 . chapter 7Oh my goodness! That was intense! Haha! Lots of exclamation points (marks?)! Anyway. I am enjoying your demonic killer. As sick as that sounds...I'll be waiting for an update. :D |
 WamprickNyx 2009-09-25 . chapter 7Whee! Thanks for the update! Poor Ed, getting beaten right after 'the date'... I wonder what will happen to the both of them. I especially liked how Win and Ed discussed Ed writing Mustang's name on the bill. That's so like him.
Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 WamprickNyx 2009-09-25 . chapter 6Ah, this is simply great! It has a wonderful suspense, the bits that are written in the murderer's POV add to the mystery and the relationship between Ed and Winry is so in canon that I cannot help but gape at your awesomeness. I honestly liked this story. This is definitely going on my faves! Please keep writing! |
 Megsaku 2009-07-12 . chapter 6Good chapter. ^^ It's getting a little odd and I can't predict anything...Maybe that's a good thing. ^^ |