Wow... great job. You really wrote them emotions well, and I loved the descriptions. It's so easy to picture this happening.

That was really cool. I don't think it was bad or juvenile, despite being three years old, so don't worry. I liked that this wasn't a scene in a vacuum - the children had lives (and interesting ones) aside from this. Is Kailé Force-sensitive? Does it matter? I still liked it.

That was really sweet. Loved it; very inspiring!

Thanks for uploading it, despite how long ago you wrote it, this was still worth the read. :)

I really hate them having moved the review button.

Oh, well.

Anyhow, I was intruigued by this. Very nicely written, despite being younger. I know I've changed a lot in my writing since 2005. A lot.

I enjoyed Kailé's miraculously spot-on guessing. A little wierd, but (shrugs) it works.

Nice job.