I'll go with the metaphorical as well, seeing as how I have a story in the same vein on my own page.

Haunting, so very, very haunting. Well done.

Phantom Jedi

metaphorical for Anakin deep within vader?hm delicious

Well written and quite clever. I liked the verbal dual between Anakin and Vader. I like to think that this is all in Vader's mind, though as Anakin and Vader are one and the same. Anakin remains the "good in him."

Nice.

I look at it both ways, though. Interesting way of conveying their struggle. Nice job, though I like to think that Anakin Skywalker and Darth Vader are the one and the same.

(shrugs) To each their own, I suppose.

Eh, nice job. You did well...

Brilliant! I loved the small little hints that it gives the reader as to what may be going on inside Darth Vader and Anakin's minds. You are a very good writer. Please keep it up. ^^