"i refused to move. i didn't want to , in case... Clow returned and found i had left". That's my favorite part of this fic. it's a very simple sentence, but reveals all of yue's emotions very well. great job on this one-shot.

Nice story. It's so good to still find gems like this on

u make me so jealous with ur obvious talent for writing fanfics (glare)! why can't i write such good stuff (sniffs indignantly) oh well...i love ur fics! i enjoy reading them and i love ur fic 'And Yue said, Bring It on' is one of my favs! It's so good!

this fic is really sad...u neva finished it tho (glares again)...but poor yue...

Oh you made Yue seem so sad the entire time. It was kind of confusing but it wasn't too bad.

This was so sweet! I loved it! Great work!

This is a very sweet story. You moved me. Well done.

Aww, so sweet! Everything! From Clow to Keroberos to Touya!

Hey Dr. M! Sweet! luv kira

“I know.” He knew? Of course he did." Yue uses the same line for talking about both Clow and Touya and then you do the same thing with “Sunrises are pretty, aren’t they?” very nicely done, subtle doc, very subtle.

The "declaration" of love was adorable and Yue's uncertainly was beyond kawaii.

Touya seemed very mature here like the creator he reminds Yue of but you somehow make this love genuine and new rather than a rebound thing.

Did Yue and Clow get together before he died? Its just one moment Yue spots similar feelings in the mages eyes and the next the mage is dead...theres a gap there...IT MUST BE FILLED!

Still love ya.

Bye.

Clow'd9

You get better and better, I don't know how you do it... This is a wonderful fanfic... I'm gonna go read everything else you've written, because I know that by extension it will be good too... Luv this!

I liked the significance of the sunrise and moonset. Lovely yaoi fic. Especially the part where Yue wonders if Touya can love the both of them. Very very good!

Yeep! Thought I'd reviewed this one! I beg forgiveness! Its great! I printed it out not that I admit to liking sappy stuff, ohhh noooo, me?

Loved it _ Simply maaaahvelous o.o

That was really good.

Awwww... and again I say awwwww... *sniffle* It's great! Next time I log in, I put it on favorites!