I hope that goblin is holding a STEAK to his eye, but as it's a goblin, who knows? This epilogue was quite amusing, especially the refs to Captain! Captain! Jack Sparrow and Captain Nemo...and "Tall, blond and goblin" cracked me up. I just wish you had someone to edit the stories for you...the appalling spelling, grammar and word misuse should really have you Bogged. But they're creative and most entertaining, so I'll keep on reading.

Foolhardy, not fool hearty.

What a horrible brat this Toby is. I don't think you're going to kill him off, what a pity, but a good bogging might improve him considerably.

It's Simon MAGUS, not Magnus...rolls eyes

I will refrain from the many, MANY corrections this chapter alone needs, and just indicate one: "He felt the child approach with anger and bête-noir". A bête-noire (correctly spelled) isn't an emotion; it's a thing...something strongly detested, a bugbear. You shouldn't try to use words you don't comprehend...

I shall have to thank that muse.
Blessed be

well i read the whole story and i felt that the charcaters were not constant. also out of character.

Oh, I liked this one, yes. Kudos to you.

lol i loved the ending!

yay! the kicking of toby in his royal arse!

Attila the Hun in feminine form? nice!lol

You know, I think I have almost read all of your stories. At least the Labyrinth ones. And the more I read, the more I'm inspired. Especially at looking at the DeviantART fan works that have been connected to your stories here and there. I'm half tempted to go back and re-read the Forged Series and let my own artistic muse out and play. Also, sometimes I don't know what I like better. The fantasy rich fan-fictions themselves, or the actual encounters of the King and the Scribe. *_*

With that said, after reading this loose end tie up, I think I may have to detour my Labyrinth fan-fic readings and take a gander at your Captain James Hook story now.

But no matter what, please keep writing! I don't care how long it takes between updates and the like. I really enjoy reading your work, and I've already dove into your newest updates. As long as you keep writing, I can wait. Til your next story and update, blessings to you, Paisley and your muse. _

You are my sunshine! _ i loved this one too but at this point i feel like you can do no wrong. Wanted to kick Toby but that was probably natural. Soon i won't be able to pick which story is my favorite. You've made me an addict...i hope your pleased with yourself.

i love the last chapters where you write yourself in with Jareth. I look forward to those bits. I can only hope he's pleased with your installments. _

Now I REALLY WANT TO GIVE THAT BOY A BEATING!

Um...can I hurt toby? Please?