|Reviews for Abduction|
| bellaplum 4/22/13 . chapter 14
a very very nice story
| Motherof8 4/20/13 . chapter 14
Loved this story
| Guest 4/20/13 . chapter 11
Sorry this story is going to end soon. It is so good
| Guest 4/20/13 . chapter 4
This Edward is a real nutjob
| GreenJazzyTwilight1901 4/11/13 . chapter 14
| GreenJazzyTwilight1901 4/10/13 . chapter 1
WOW! Love it! xxx:)
| CullenMasenAlways 2/9/13 . chapter 14
I loved your story! It's so different. I thought that someone else was going to separate Bella from her family... haha anyway, it was great, congratulations!
| MusicalLover17 1/2/13 . chapter 14
| Lost in a magic realm 8/7/12 . chapter 14
This story was actually really good untill this last chapter, where it suddenly became some what hurried and with out much heart. That made me sad. :'(
It would have been better for this story if you had let it end with chapter 13, eventhough it would be a sad and unhappy ending, but it would make the story so much stronger and more heartfelt.
I'm adding this story to my list of favorites, because of those first 13 chapters. They had a story and a heart within.
It would benefit this story, if chapter 14 either was removed or divided up into 3 epiloges expanding over time and with a little more filling.
You can write and tell a story, you just need to think a little more about how to end a good story. That is the only thing you need to practise. :)
| Zara54321 7/8/12 . chapter 13
OMG! That was sooooooooooo cute! You are sooooooooooo good at writing! I loved how it all came together in the end. BTW: How old are Edward, Bella, Alice, Jasper, Emmett .e.t.c, in this story?
p.s. sorry i posted this review here, instead of at the end. Aren't allowed to post two reviews per chapter :(
| brnkofeternity06 6/3/12 . chapter 1
love it! Its hard to find a good story but once you find it, you can't let it go. Thanks for a great first chapter haha
| Zara54321 3/6/12 . chapter 14
love this story!
| darkangel0212 1/9/12 . chapter 1
good job on your stories
| sarahlouise80 6/4/11 . chapter 14
fantastic story glad they ended up together in the end.
| haleyscott305 12/4/10 . chapter 4