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lucyferr
2009-11-26 . chapter 6
Nice album.

Love the phrase "in which orifice Minister Trout had sequestered his head"

Still not a Molly fan... she jumps to more conclusions than a bug blatter beast from Traal.
lucyferr
2009-11-25 . chapter 4
* Luna just shrugged. “A mushroom spore is smaller than the eye can see and is ejected from the gills. If the spores are truly the mode of infection, I might not have to touch them. It would depend on the amount of spores needed to infect.”

It's nice to see that Luna is around for more than the purpose of being a love interest to a fool.

* The odd thing was that she had not been infected

I'm surprised she and Pothead haven't been infected, given their engagements with the Dark.

*The nib of her quill snapped

Why is she using a quill and not a biro?

* It took patience learned from years of being best friends to two impulsive young men to not reach over her desk and wring his pale neck.

Okay, I was wrong. Now I know why she keeps Ron and his bespectacled bitch around - she needs them to teach her how to deal with idiots - a useful skill for anyone in business. (PS: Harry never says anything against Ron or abandons Ron even when Ron's wrong so Harry must be Ron's bitch)

* "Last time I mentioned taking you out, he threw shit at me.”
“What? What kind of shit?”

LOL!

The idea of Snape being short is odd - but quite possibly true. Rickman taller than Snape, Watson prettier than Granger, yep, I believe it.

* ... crossing her arms under her breasts. Draco made a mental note to induce that particular action more often. It really did offer a spectacular view.

Ah, Draco...

* She’s an independent young woman, Harry Potter, and her world doesn’t revolve around you, you know

Nice to see that Molly has finally learnt *something* from Hermione.

It is most peculiar to see Snape suffer great torment from an arrogant little snot not called Potter...
lucyferr
2009-11-25 . chapter 3
* It also amused her that neither Snape nor Malfoy had realized that she had cast a countercharm to the Muffliato

LOL - nice one.

* “Uncle, I am going to start whinging, and I know that you hate it when I whinge.”

You're keeping Draco is poncy character so weel!

movings lol

*. Ron didn’t agree; he had been raised to believe that anything Dark was evil. Hermione, being Muggleborn, hadn’t been taught that. They had had many arguments over the years regarding the inherent goodness or evil of magic, and he found many of Hermione’s thoughts on the subject much too liberal for his taste.

It's good to have a character around that represents the voice of the conservative (and usually stupid)

* He elbowed Ron to forestall any more Hermione-baiting.

Difficult to understand why Hermione keeps Ron around as a friend, let alone bothered dating him. Must be because she doesn't have many (any?) friends without a tie to the idiot weasel.
lucyferr
2009-11-25 . chapter 2
It's nice to see Hermione in control :-)
mahlee
2009-07-03 . chapter 10
brilliant but scary
excessivelyperky
2009-06-27 . chapter 10
Snape should drag her back to Grimmauld Place and make Hermione take that last dose _now_. She's clearly necessary to help create a real cure, and...Snape can't even bear to snark at her right now. Very good chapter.
Maddie50
2009-06-08 . chapter 10
This plague or evil infestation is getting frighteningly out of hand.

Draco being such a lecher is very off putting. I hope Hermione is not taken with him. Perhaps Severus can save the day by taking care of Hermione.
Megan
2009-05-30 . chapter 10
Oh well it's a shame you won't be doing a chapter by chapter update here i suppose i will continue on ashwinder but you should know it's really good, and now i'm addicted so i can't wait for your next update. really good.
Uzumaki Mai
2009-05-28 . chapter 10
Sad to hear it. Please, let me know if you`ll really stop to update here so I can follow you on TPP.
Have you ever considered posting it on OWL?
Uzumaki Mai
2009-05-28 . chapter 9
Lovely chapter. Didn`t quite understand the hole house on fire thing, but it was nice anyway.
angryteabag
2009-05-23 . chapter 10
I am greatly enjoying this story, I'm just miffed at myself for not reading sooner.

Please do continue to update here on , I'll promise to review every chapter if you do. It will be added to me favourites momentarily.

P.S the odd side of me wants to see a Draco/Hermione romance in this, as well as with Snape...
GLoW91
2009-05-17 . chapter 10
another good chap



i do hope u continue to0 post here im not much for un complete fics on ashwinder cause theres no update alert option so you have to keep checkin then u forget etc.


but i can understand the annoyance,

thankyou again for a lovely chap :)


x glow
boycottingwinter
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
or you could keep posting on here? pretty please?
notwritten
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
I have enjoyed this interesting reading. Keep smiling. :-)
Nutters4Potter
2009-05-16 . chapter 10
That Draco can be pretty funny by purposely setting the boys on edge with his putting Hermione on the couch. Severus finally gets some alone time with Hermione, but in a crazy lab of no return. I hope severus takes good care of her during her illness- we'll have to see how much darkness the goody two shoes has in her. Thanks for the update.
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