put in some paragraphs containing some complete sentences and you have an award winning fanfic! that was almost gold, but much better than my first fanfic...

Sad. Poor, poor Misto! I wish Vicky would go back to him!

Wow. very nice. A perspective on them that isn't uncommon, but was handled in a way to make it less cliched. bravo.

Mistoffelees and Victoria 4ever !

Beautiful. Sweet. Gorgeous. But absolutely beautiful.

oah...That made me sad kind of. I love MistoxVictoria. I feel kind of sad. Very intense though. The rythm was good and the layout was wonderful. I loved it, and it was depressing to me at the same time... Oh well. Great Job though!

This is a really sweet poem. I loved it!

Aw, how sad. :( But beautifully written!

I liked it. :)

Angie

This is gorgeous!

I hate Misto/Vix to death, but this poem ALMOST converted me.

Please write more!