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Avadhani
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
Show, I am still holding out for Andy/Oscar and this is why! :')
Adrienne-sensei
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
Aw! That was so cute! *dissolves in fangirlish glee*

Ever since "Business Trip," I have loveloveloved Andy/Oscar. And you wrote it /perfectly/. This was so in-character, and just like the show, and wonderfully written, and adorable, and...ah...I loved it! :D
Julienne
2008-12-16 . chapter 1
Aw, this story made me love Andy and Oscar a little more. I definitely wanted something to happen about the A/O dynamic on the show after "Business Trip", but it hasn't yet... This fic was great and tides me over. Andy's breakdown with Oscar broke my heart. Keep it up!
XMarisolX
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
That was so melancholy. Somedays I grieve for Andy. I admire your boldness since this will almost certainly be AU soon, but it was a persuasive conjecture.
BasementOfTheMansion
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
ZOMG.

How do I love this fic? Let me count the ways (chrono, not rated by actual preference):

1. Oscar. Wonderful, woefully underused Oscar. Oscarfic is automatically for the win, period.

2. Oscar and Andy, with their fancy new bond. I totally agree; they should fall in love. Those two have full-on bromance.

3. The return of Elizibeth. Oh, poor girl. The twin soul.

4. Some Jim-hate goin' on. I am so sick of him, especially since Fun Run. Gack. It is very him to be wrapped up in Pam and ignore any other souls in pain. Friend request DENIED! Muahahaha!

5. Dwight's Grinch grin. Perfect analogy.

6. The fact that you took the time and effort to get HCT in there, by name no less. And it is so sadly like
Andy to have no other friends to come to his party. I want to hug him...

7. Oscar's backup plan. Heh. Sounds like me at every party I ever go to.

8. Oscar's uncertain wistfulness about Gil. It's very real, and very much like a cross-section of life. I love how you breathed this bit of belivable charactization into Gil, who is basically just a name on the show.

9. Drunk, needy Andy. Another reason why I've gone three-sixty on nearly all my character opinions since s4. What pathos. I really feel for the guy.

10. “I have no toenail. For her. I did it all for her.” Oh. Andy. You deserve better.

11. Andy's standing invitation to the FTC.

12. Even tapping fingers is a song. He's got the music in his soul!

13. The crying scene in its entirety. Killed. Andy's need for comfort, Oscar's total lost-at-sea attempt to be a person who can deal with that much emotion and the fact that he'd rather be out there with Andy than dealing with Michael. And getting futher with Oscar than Angela. Funny and sad, like so much about Andy.

14. Oscar as Best Man. 'Cause he is the best, man.

15. The crackers. Of love. Love Crackers. Hee...

You may also call this list "Fifteen Reasons Why I Don't Have A Life And/Or A Boyfriend."

I've never felt there was really a slash pair I could get behind in TO, but I think this one just might be it. You'd have to be dead not to love the rapport between those two.
pokey
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
You made me want Andy and Oscar to make out. I never thought that would happen (mainly because Andy freaks me out and I only want the best for darling Oscar).
gnbrules
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Depamify. Andy using the phrase JoBros. It doesn't get any better than this. Awesome job. And I totally thought about Oscar and Andy getting together too, though not with any serious thought...;)
Mrs. JackSawyerSayidDesmond
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Aw. That was cute. After watching "Business Trip," I'm practically waiting for something to happened between the two of them. And you, that would just be ok. (Angela doesn't deserve Andy anyway...) :]
OverkillKiller7
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
Wow. You seem to have perfectly transferred the chemistry and hilarity of Oscar/Andy into the setting of a certain bachelor party.

This was awesome. The whole thing, with Oscar watching this party unfold while Jim texts Pam, and all the a-cappela guys talking with the people of DM, and not actually minding.

I liked Oscar's views on Jim, and how the fact that Jim is teting and talking to Pam the whole time kind of annoys him.

Wow. I guess you have Oscar pretty much perfect in this fic. Job well done, my friend.
dorydafish
2008-11-17 . chapter 1
in love with the idea of andy and ocsar hooking up! it would be so great. They had so much chemistry!!

I love the way you wrote this...humour but with a touch of fluffiness...

Realy hope you write more of these two
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