|Reviews for iPod Shuffle Challenge: Blue Seed|
| Martin III 12/8/08 . chapter 2
Sorry that it's taken me so long to review this. "Through the Glass" is an outstanding piece of work, a beautiful little Kusanagi retrospective. You overview his life, and his relationship with Momiji in particular, without lingering on the past, instead simply taking the essential grain that explains his feelings, his predicament. You've brought in a fresh understanding of Kusanagi's part in Blue Seed 2. Very nicely done.
Have to say that I don't care for "If You Could". AU only works when it's done for a specific purpose... and to be blunt, this is basically just gratuitous angst. Decently written, but doesn't have any point.