I loved this story! You did an amazing job! The way you developed Beyond was stunning, along with all the other characters. You have just gained yourself a huge fan. :) I can't say there was a part in the story I didn't like, it kept going with very few slow points, but the slow point were interesting and helped bring the whole story together. Kudos! Again Fantastic job!

-JoPo

You know, all I know about the comic come from a little wikipidia reading but that doesn't change the fact that this is TOTALLY AWESOME! ADSOLUTLY LOVE IT!

I'm going to the sequal right now!

The only thing I hated was the death of Connor

Alas, so ends a good series...how ever, the information of a sequel is quite nice. Kudos for the good story.

I absouletly loved this last chapter! I mean you threw me for a loop with your introduction of Jason back in the world of the living. Still Terry is holding his own against him using his mind tricks and it looks like he's openly declared he wants to be Batman. Love that Batman is being such a good father. Alfred and Tim seem to be enjoying his company a lot and Terry is chaning as well. Oh I can't wait for the sequal!

Hey I just noticed, you hardly have any reviews for a story of this quality. And to me that is an absolute sin. So though i have much to say about this story I am to lazy to write it all; but i will say this. Can't wait for Nights of Tomorrow

Good conclusion, really showed how Terry is progressing as a person - emotions, understanding, "witty banter", etc. Nice job and a very enjoyable story.

can;t wait for sequel

I feel the need to point out that it is usually the older son who inherits in Western culture. The younger gets some and builds up their own whatever. Then the two can become allies, connected by their shared blood. Now if only only Damian and Terry can realize that. It would be great to see the two of them take down Joker together.

Just a hunch here, but are you familiar with Death Note. I just swear that the way Beyond spoke to Superman as the Voice reminded me of L. The characters thus far are quite similar. Anyway, liking what I'm seeing so far. Keep it up.

Interesting so far, just one detail. It is spelled Facility, not faculty. Hate to be a stickler, but when I see the mistake performed repeatedly I can't help but want to fix it.

amusing

Terry's back! For the most part, anyway, and that's a start. *cheers*

I'm finding it amusing that it took Damian's homicidal behavior to get Terry to start finding his way back to himself. Terry really does like the brat, doesn't he? *laughs* Of course, I wonder if Damian will ever find out just what his deadweight brother went through at the hands of Cadmus. Heh, I figure he'll be pissed because they horned in on his territory. If anyone's going to destroy Terry, it'll be him and no one else.

Excellent chapter!

Amazing chapter. I can't believe Daimon would come all the way back to Gotham to get help to avoid being taken over. Then again its not that surprising he does have some good qualities. Those fight sequences and kidnappings were impressive, but what was more interesting was to see Terry finally come out of his shell and help his brother. Talia seems pretty pissed that her dad is trying to take her child from her. I can't wait to see what this new allience comes up with.

This is an excellent story. And I found myself saddened by the death of Conner. But still, this is a excellent story regardless and should have FAR more reviews than it does right now.