wow. i have to say she handled it better than i would have (e.g. scream at the top of my lungs). I think Kankuro. I've read so many fanfics where gaara gets the girl and Kankuros all lonely. He needs some love. lolz. I loved thsi chapter! Update soon!

~Flame Jnr

XD i love it!

Heh heh heh... 'The nail that sticks its head up is the one that gets hit,' *Ignorance is bliss* I so-oo envy Ari...

Welocme back! Kira's really in the hot seat now for what she just said, however I can't believe those nuts can't consider her harmless! If she WERE an Akatsuki member she would have broken free by now! But as a wise man said "Trust is easy to destroy, it takes time to earn."

As for the "Common Knowledge" as to WHAT the Akatsuki are after that would have to be Ari and that necklace she took off that ninja she met when she first arrived. He told his fellow Akatsuki and they're looking for her, now Kankuro thinks Kira IS that girl!

Just wait till word gets out that there are TWO girls without Charka, I can understand how word got to the Leaf Village. Kira will be so pleased to meet Ari and she'll be pleased to meet Kira!

You are fantastic! Update again soon before Christmas! Later!

O.O This. Is. Epic! >w< I love how you really did manage to make it seem so... Real. Unlike most other fics like this.

XD Yeay for Gaara! Yeay for Kankuro! ^w^ I love that bit about the chakra strings XD That was just epic ^w^

Not only do I love this story, but I also love how quickly you update it!
:) and Kankuro! yes.
i love suna!
MORE!

Who was it that Ariadna met? *is very confused* @_@

Brilliant story! Absolutely love it! *goes to read more* ^w^

She's a tough person, but I'm wondering how Kira's gonna deal with the reality of it. I'd think worse than Ari, seeing as she already knew of the characters, and THEN had to deal with them as something other than beings for her reading entertainment. Maybe with Kankuro's presence she won't automatically be offed be "trigger happy" patrolmen. Looking forward to the next one. Peace.

the reason i decided to go ahead and read the fuckin' story:

'why? because reality is a bitch'
beatiful, simply beautiful, my friend.

This chaper was nice!! I really love this story! I hope you will post the next chapter soon!! I really love you for making this story XD

Oh... not it's getting exciting... :D

Not the best way to spend the first day of the New Year. The first word has something wrong with the font though. "Почему...?" Confused the crap out of me until I just decided it was a mistake. Luckily for this one, she has knowledge of the Naruto universe and can speak Japanese. Unfortunately, she decided to say she knew the Akatsuki. Poor girl. Can't wait to see what she goes through in the next chapter, or what Ari goes through if it's her POV the whole chapter. Until then. :)

Nice chapter! It's interesting to see how Ariadna's experience could be different if she had known about anime/manga or spoke japanese. Great chapter! Update soon please!

Oh! Poor, silly girl. Is she going ot have a love interest too? Akatsuki? I wish I could learn Japanese, but I've never been to a school where they teach it. I loved this chapter! I can't wait for the two girls to meet. Please, please, please update soon!

~Flame Jnr

Heys! I'm sorry its been so long since I've reviewed. I love your story, but I've been really busy lately and exams are coming up. HOW DARE KIBA CALL HER ARI! NEVER AMKE FUN OF SOMEONE'S HEIGHT (says the shortest person in her high school) I'm goign to go read the next chapter. Kepp updating!
~Flame Jnr