Really enjoyed this..thanks for the interesting twists to the characters.

This is so very brilliant... I love it. You excel at P&P fanfic writing. I can't wait to read the next part :)

This story has been incredibly gripping, and I have to admit I am almost disappointed that you didn't flesh out the details of thi wedding more thoroughly, considering the detailed treatment you gave so much of the rest of the tale. I felt emotionally involved in the characters, and there aren't words for how muxh I appreciated this view into your version of Mr. Darcy's mind. It seems a fascinating place, and the perspective was simply excellent. Plot- wise, I thought everything up to the business with the lawsuit was superb, but as I said before, I wish there had been a more spectacular finale. However, that is likely the insatiable reader within me speaking. Certainly one of the more excellent prices of fiction I have read, published or unpublished, and one of the first fanfiction I've read that I may return to for a second read.

Beautiful mastery of the language of storytelling

I totally LOVED LOVED LOVED this story! It was amazing! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! This Darcy was so very sweet and even in the beginning he didn't really thought anything truly bad about Elisabeth! I'm so sad to see it ending! Go to read "The End of the Beginning"..

I know it's been many years since you completed this story, but I've read it today and I'd just like to compliment you on a wonderful P&P variation and thank you for sharing it with us all. I hope to read more from you in the future.

What an excellent story. The developing of the characters was amazing! Thank you

Too lovely for words. Well written and organized. Good plot pacing. Favorited.

Sweet story!

What a cliffie! Eek!

I love Uncle James' gift and message

Wonderful Darcy has redeemed himself

Oh, Darcy. So confused

Wow, what an exceptional first meeting!

Beautiful story, thanks!