love your fic a pure work of harry potter fanfiction art

This was a great chapter, but in the confrontation between Tom and Tobias, Tom says, "How far you step over your boundaries depends entirely on how bloody you are when you leave." Isn't it the other way around, "How bloody you are when you leave depends entirely on how far you step over your boundaries?" It makes more sense, but doesn't sound nearly as cool. :)

You know, I want to hate Tom for putting Harry in so much pain, but for some reason I can't. I guess I knew it would happen sometime in the story. And you know what's really weird? Ever sense Tom entered the story, I got this creepy feeling of unease in all the scenes he was in, but when he started cursing Harry, it left. I guess I have an internal lie detector, huh? Keep writing!

I Love this story more and more as i continu to read it. It's everything i would want in a story and more! :D
Awesome Job.

please please please update! this story is amazing! i love it so MUCH! dont let it end here, not when you just got going with an already amazing and fabulous story!

Type your review for this chapter here.. please update

Hey,

I really like your story, I find the idea really interesting... Your charachters are really realistic and interesting, Tom is not a crazy murderer, but not a sweet lover, he's a Dark Lord, a real one without this dark aura, this dark soul but not insane ... For many persons, dark is insane, you've choose to do something more complex, and I love it !
Your Harry is fascinating too, he has his dark side but still his has values, and he remains a teenage with funny sides
Love the relationship between them too (Yeah, I love many things ) ... Not insane, not smart, just unique
Can't wait to read the next chapter ! Thanks for writting...

LLF

aww I love seeing the relationship between them grow! so great!

really truly one of a kind story you have going here.:) hope you'll put more to it someday. cause I so can't wait for more to come to it.

WAAAAAAAHHHH! You just got to Sirius and Moony and you haven't updated in so long... WAAAAAAHHHH!

I BLOODY LOVE THIS STORY! Your characterization is top-notch! And I like how it's smart!strong!Harry rather than genius!powerful!godly!Harry if you know what I mean. I not particularly fond of the stories that make him so strong so fast and such. GO TMRakaLV/HP!

Are the other Death Eaters going to make an appearance? Bellatrix or Fenrir for example? And I do hope that Siri and Remus joins dear Harry since I actually like those two; the Wealsely (did I spell that right?) twins as well. I'm happy that Draco made his appearance though! I think the two of them will get along wonderfully! I do hope everything with Hermione goes over nicely.

Hmm I do believe that I'd everything for now... Bear in mind I'll be watching this story for its next update so take your time and write the next chapter, ok? Good.

From a fellow TMRakaLV/HP fan,
Sa-chan

This is an interesting story, and I'm looking forward to Tom's reaction to his 'gift'.

But but but... What happens neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeext ?

It's so interesting.

I loved this fic sooo much! It's a same you havent been able to update in a while but i do hope you find some time to finish this one day. Will be stalking this fic! Lol
Thanks for sharing!