you weren't to hard on light at all. and i am a big light fan so i guess that means something. thats who he is, he wouldnt be light if he wasnt. also, that is what makes him sexy hehe...
very nicely written. you're very good with words.

wow your an amazing writer i must say xDD
you took in the total purpose of light/kira there was a mix of them both becoming one and misa it was awesome =]]

Umm... Like AWESOME!Like totally real genius how you explained Lights feelings. The complete dominace over Misa was wonderful.The title was really confusing until I`ve read it. Good job.

His thinking was exactly as I thouhgt it would be! That was amazing!

CUTE!

I really liked this, youe use of punctuation as a metaphor was really well written.

Keep going! :)

This was beyond great. Not just typical icky porn fiction. Very well written and insightful with regard to the series and characters. You have a gift.

OH MY GOD! That sent SHIVERS down my spine! Wow...I loved your writing skill! You brought out Lights' domineering nature SO well! Just amazing! I loved it! :)

hahaha its kinda embarassing to review.. but all i can say is.. its good! X]

Wow... that was intense. I LOVE the punctuation metaphor that goes throughout this story. I LOVE IT. It's so perfect for a short piece of writing that other writers see. Seriously, it's wonderful.

And you write het very well. It's hot.

However, I have to say that I find the italic thoughts a little distracting. I think that if you had tried to incorporate that into the narration (which is already from Light's pov), then it would have flowed a bit better. It's still pretty damn good as it is. My only other criticism is that, in a piece this short, you could expand the metaphor even more? Hmm.. it's really good as it is, but since the title is "punctuation Marks", I think I was expecting the middle to have some good punctuation things in it too. But otherwise, this was a fantastic story. Well done.

Oh dear...this is amazing and Light/Misa-s hardly EVER interest me at all. I actually don't think you were too hard on Light, I am a fan of him, but in a way this is how he's constantly he shown himself to be in canon and it's far more realistic than the people who assume that he's "basically good, but misguided."

I also love how every bit of dialogue furthered the story and wasn't just useless words. Nothing out of character was said and there was not one single vulgar, out-of-place thing which is extremely difficult in stories like this.