|Reviews for Glimpses|
| CrCullenZ 3/31/09 . chapter 2
AW! i'm so sad its over! i wanted it keep going on forever, but that's out of the question :) i loved this story and i actually cried on some parts. i know, emotional. it was hard for me to read when edward was thinking about cassandra hayes and what they did together, it's messed up. well anyways, i liked it...a lot. you should write more stories like this. one question, why is it rated m when there wasnt really a sex scene? just wondering :)
| Ozzma105 3/29/09 . chapter 2
I thought it was amazing! I LOVED IT great writing!
| Tyley1 3/27/09 . chapter 2
ok so i know that I just reviewed healing and found out that this was there after and let me tell you I was very happy to see how you wrote it - it fit so well with the story and it was nice to see them have a happy ending - thanks for the entertainment!
| Caelitus Mihi Vires 3/26/09 . chapter 2
aw! that was so cute, I loved that ending, it was perfect. amazing story, very well written. I liked how you had all that last minute closure, what with Cassandra's reappearance and Renee's grave. It was very much needed and you did it in a way that was not all overdone or corny. Overall, two thumbs up from me. ]
| grnapo 3/25/09 . chapter 2
aww.. i'm really happy with the ending.. i loved this story.. healing had the perfect amount of angst and the epilogues had the perfect amount of happines.. thank you for writing this story! i loved and enjoyed it very much!
| grnapo 3/25/09 . chapter 1
i loved this chapter! i love how they bicker and fight like an old married couple.. it makes them more real.. thank you for giving us this glimpse in edward and bella's future..
| tentimesten 3/25/09 . chapter 2
i loved it. healing is one of my favorite fanfics, so i really liked getting the "glimpses" into their future.
i think you handled the Cassandra thing really well. i was reading it and at first i was thinking "oh no hes going to see her and its going to mess everything up" but you didn't do that. :) it provided the closure that was needed.
the whole story was just really well written and thought out and sweet. great story :)
| churroettes94 3/24/09 . chapter 2
loved the ending it was totally perfect
| Ironic Twist 3/23/09 . chapter 2
Maybe it's corny or immature, but I love HEA and I loved having it spelled out for me, chapter and verse. I didn't mind Hayes returning for this one encounter.
| typing-pictures 3/23/09 . chapter 2
I loved it :)
i think it's a cute little tie up for the ending.
it leaves it feeling complete :)
| speace2 3/21/09 . chapter 2
That was a perfect follow up story. The length was just right. I am so glad that you did this. I loved getting a glimpse of their future. You really do need to give yourself more credit. You are so young and you still did a wonderful job setting up the whole story. Your attention to detail is fantastic. I look forward to your future stories.
P.S. My wedding was at the Pointe Hilton so I liked that reference :)
| Ami the Elemental Sorceress 3/17/09 . chapter 2
I really like your story. I was going to right a review for every chapter of this epilouge and your full story, but i didn't want to break the train of the story, if that makes any sense, so bear with my list.
I like how you wrote the story with the conflict being out of the way, the the healing being the focus. so many stories add more and more drama and conflict to gain reviews, they can't live and let live. This one did, it had a satisfactory, happy ending.
I like how you characterized Marcy, because if i ever become a psyciatrist, or a psycologist like everyone says i should, but i'm terrified i'll mess up, since i'm not exactly a people-person.
I liked how nobody in this story is a "bad guy" everyone has issues, and they needed to work through them. there are no sterotypes like "cutter", or constant, inhuman obstacle-like characters, they all grow and change in the end, and we see real character growth.
I liked the interaction between the characters, outside of couples. we don't see enough of that in most stories, fanfiction or other wise, when we have consistant "paired up" couples.
I'm glad we don't have any Jacob/Bella. I Personally don't think it could ever work in this Universe, or in twilight canon. In order for most fanfictions with J/B in it to work, the characters personalities have to change, so that they are no longer them selves. If Canon Bella and Jacob didn't have parents who were friends, and didn't meet as children, they wouldn't have intereacted nearly as much.
I liked how Rosalie wasn't just some terminally angry blonde, alice wasn't just a hyper shopaholic, emmet wasn't a empty headed moron, and jasper wasn't just a closed off vampire. You made these, and more, accual people, and not just characters.
I should probably stop now, before i break something. and excuse my poor puncuation and capitalization.
| christinemarie13 3/17/09 . chapter 2
I've loved reading this 'series' I suppose you'd call it. It was a pretty original idea. Yeah, I've seen stories with Bella in a psych hospital but it usually because she loses it when Edward leaves, or something along those line, not a story like this where they are both in there and have separate issues. It was very well written and had me jumping from chapter to chapter wondering what would happen next.
Sorry for the tardiness of my review, but I can't review from my phone and that is where I read both stories.
I can't wait to read more of your work. :)
| robyntj5998 3/14/09 . chapter 2
I was glad to read these two chapters and see how they have grown together and what their lives are like now. I think it is a fitting end :)
| Pixie Not A Fairy 3/14/09 . chapter 2
Aw! :) I loved the ending! And the fact that you put the epilogue to the epilogue at the start ... it made me laugh! :) xoxo