 marcell sou 2008-11-25 . chapter 1 Great fic, everybody loves Aarch/Artegor!
I really like how you presenter Artegors feelings, he looked like a dark but not evil character. I pity him, poor guy... |
 Turkmen 2008-11-19 . chapter 1Aw man, this so damn great! And lol, Artegor's hair xD I see we share the love of making fun of them!
This fic really explains what could have been the reason why Artegor and Aarch ended up as enemies. I see you're filling all the gaps in the fandom and for that I love you from the bottom of my heart. And for the incredible writhing skillz :) I really enjoy reading your fics because although they're not overfilled with metaphores and ten-inch long descriptions you can't say they are simple. Quite the opposite- the characters are described as complex beings, coloured with all shades of gray. And gay, yay! :D
I also loled truly and deeply at the mention of Aarch' semi-humanoid relationships. And the last lines, were good too, I like the mention of teh girl from Wambas planet. Whether it was Simbai or not, still cool!
I don't know if you did it on purpouse, but durring that catastrophic match on Akillian Norata lost his leg (as far as I rebember). But I guess it wasn't that important for the story :)
Anyway What I like the most is that i this story (and in 'Netherworld' too btw )pretty much everything is believeable. How the characters act, the setting... and there is no damn soup-ophra drama that you find in most of the fics (or mary sues or other horrible monsters for that matter).
Ok I'm getting random, sorry xD
In short: good work, it made ma day all bright&happy, keep up the good work! |
 GFSista 2008-11-19 . chapter 1Firstly, thanks for decicating this oneshot it to me and Mitsuko Soma! It was a fantastic oneshot, very descriptive and funny in some parts 'Aarch’s open-mouthed expression of shock made him look as if someone had hit him in the solar plexus with a football.' that was funny lol! It's gone to my faves and I await your next chapter of Netherworld with baited breath! |