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Reviews for: Icarus Ascending
NeoNix(unsignedinOo;)
2008-11-27 . chapter 1
I still can't believe that this is the only Aarch/Artegor fic here, it's so canon it's not even funny!

Great fic as usual, you have a real talent for keeping the characters believable! ^^
FemaleSpock
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
It is completely canon! I love the part about Artegor's hair it made me laugh so much!
marcell sou
2008-11-25 . chapter 1
Great fic, everybody loves Aarch/Artegor!
I really like how you presenter Artegors feelings, he looked like a dark but not evil character. I pity him, poor guy...
Turkmen
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
Aw man, this so damn great! And lol, Artegor's hair xD I see we share the love of making fun of them!

This fic really explains what could have been the reason why Artegor and Aarch ended up as enemies. I see you're filling all the gaps in the fandom and for that I love you from the bottom of my heart. And for the incredible writhing skillz :) I really enjoy reading your fics because although they're not overfilled with metaphores and ten-inch long descriptions you can't say they are simple. Quite the opposite- the characters are described as complex beings, coloured with all shades of gray. And gay, yay! :D

I also loled truly and deeply at the mention of Aarch' semi-humanoid relationships. And the last lines, were good too, I like the mention of teh girl from Wambas planet. Whether it was Simbai or not, still cool!
I don't know if you did it on purpouse, but durring that catastrophic match on Akillian Norata lost his leg (as far as I rebember). But I guess it wasn't that important for the story :)
Anyway What I like the most is that i this story (and in 'Netherworld' too btw )pretty much everything is believeable. How the characters act, the setting... and there is no damn soup-ophra drama that you find in most of the fics (or mary sues or other horrible monsters for that matter).

Ok I'm getting random, sorry xD
In short: good work, it made ma day all bright&happy, keep up the good work!
GFSista
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
Firstly, thanks for decicating this oneshot it to me and Mitsuko Soma! It was a fantastic oneshot, very descriptive and funny in some parts 'Aarch’s open-mouthed expression of shock made him look as if someone had hit him in the solar plexus with a football.' that was funny lol! It's gone to my faves and I await your next chapter of Netherworld with baited breath!
Mitsuko Soma
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
Review Time! First of all I would like to thank you for dedicating this story to me and GFSista , that was a really sweet thing to do and I apreciate it. You truly managed to give an insight on how an Artegor/Arch would turn out.I'm not really sure if I believe in the concept of Arch ''gettin' it on'' with Artegor so I think the outcome of this fic was quite realistic. I'll be waiting for the next chapter of Netherworld.
Mitsu
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