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Dang. I'm reading this after you've completed it, and I still want that hint. The whole 'That's a secret!' line is so familiar, it's been nagging at me for ages...
As for the story, koalas definitely approve.

neuter the fucking bastard!

This story was awesome I was loving it to death. And then you had to pull fucking FEM!Haku out of thin air. I hate this, let me say this again .THIS! What is your problem with Haku haveing a penis like he was meant to? He's pretty so what, this IS anime and manga we're talking about there are plenty of pretty men and boys in it. Haku does not have boobs,Haku is a crossdresser at best,Haku is not a woman. Haku is a boy. I refuse to read this any further and you have ruined an otherwise amazing story,good job.

Very emotional chapter and your best yet. It will be very hard to top such a chapter

I don't get why the only jutsu you label as an elemental jutsu is fire style. You've had a bunch of people use earth style and wind style but only label them as "ninja art".

This chapter wasn't on par with the rest you say? Hahaha sorry to say this but this was probably your best chapter so far. Don't know why I'm sorry about that tho

Your trying too hard to push everyone together, especially Sakura and lee, and temari and shikamaru. I don't think it's a good thing to have them all end up in a relationship at the same time.

These were probably your best fight scenes you've written so far so good job on that.

Uh oh looks like sakura's growth was for nothing. She's dead

Well I'm glad that Naruto cant use sword hax anymore (temporarily at least). I look forward to seeing him fight with just a normal sword as it should be in any story that he has a sword, however I doubt that you'll have him fight with it now that its no longer hax like susano'o which will just prove my point that the sword takes away from the story in terms of Naruto's growth as a ninja. Hopefully this won't be the case.

Still hate the sword and I doubt I'll ever be comfortable with something like that in any story other than a pure bleach story.

Ugh you had to have them go help team 7. I don't see the point as orochimaru wouldn't kill any of the members of team 7 as he wants them to advance. However with team 8 he could go all out cause he doesn't need them to advance and realistically they'd die.

The fights were pretty lame. You don't really describe them well, yo just say thy trow a kick or two and really it doesn't feel like ninja are fighting but more like elementary students.

About the nin hinata took out. You are mistaken with the elemental match up. This is how it goes: windlightningearthwaterfirewind. So really the iwa ninja had the advantage over hinata.

Honestly Naruto doesn't need another power source he already has the Kyuubi which is more than enough. The Kyuubi is a part of him but the sword isn't and feels cheap. Can't wait for the chuunin exams tho!

Nononono please don't let it happen. You're getting way to close to bleach with that sword shit. What I really don't like when authors cross over into bleach territory with swords is that t doesn't feel like the ninja (Naruto) is the one who wins because of his power, he's only winning cause the sword is hax! I really hope you don't use the sword too often and even if you only use it once more it'll feel cheap that Naruto won because of stupid plot-no-jutsu.

When Naruto blows up like that the words don't feel real and that in turn makes his anger feel unrealistic. It's also kinda boring that all the scenes that he gets angry have pretty much the exact same dialogue.

About zabuza and haku. I don't really care if they live or die but if they do live I hope you don't bring them to konoha. That happens to much and I don't see that happening since zabuza's goal is to free mizufrom yagura