I'm glad we got to see more of Elphaba and Bronia this time around. And, her realizing that she loves Liir made me so happy.

FINALLY! THANK YOU! Not just for the wonderful fantastic amazing update (which I obviously loved) but thank you even more for having Elphaba realize she loves her son. I hate fics where she isn't a good mother despite the fact that that is how she is in the book. You kept her in character, just gave her a little character development and it was beautiful, really. I loved this chapter!

Aww. I'm glad that Elphaba finally realizes that she loves Liir! So sweet.

*Claps* Yay! An update! It was worth the wait. Aww, poor Elphaba, still in love with Fiyero, but can't go anywhere with that :( Yay for Bronia! And yay for Elphaba finally realizing she loves the boy...wow, I'm saying yay a lot lately. Well, great chapter!

~Pops~

Jas and Bronia kick ass. And so did this chapter, what with Elphaba realizing she actually loves Liir. It took awhile, but you'll never lose my interest, love.

xoxox
Tiggy

Hey, hey Elphaba... get Yero to watch the baby. *shifty eyes*
Your writing is, as usual, brilliant. It comes off as very sophisticated and mature, which suits your subject matter very well. :)

FYI, I'm so supposed to be working on my Women's history midterm...


Another great chapter. Poor ELphaba...

Very nice and yet so sad...

I finally got around to reading the rest of this...only about a month too late. Hooray for me. :P
And I loved it, of course. Your writing is amazing, your language perfect, your characterisation astounding (on a totally unrelated note, Bronia reminded me a little of myself... :P), your story amazing. I love you, HCO, and don't you forget it. :D

Haha, I love the Idina Menzel lyrics you used in this chapter, XD

I did a complete double take, it works perfectly too

Keep writing, your fan fic is amazing! =D

that was really really cool, but im still like 'damn it Fiyero dont love your wife' I guess i'm just bias. anyhu LOVE IT ideal Christmas Prezzie :p =] merry christmas to you too =]

Oh, dear. Poor Elphaba. I have to say my favorite was Elphaba yelling at Liir: “What the hell is the matter with you? You’re fed. You’re clean, you’re warm, you’re held, and I can’t think of anything else you could require."
So very true. Aren't children delightful?
Happy Holidays/Winter Solstice/Life, I suppose.

Still don´t want to log in, can´t figure out the Deutsche keyboard easily (especially y and z being mixed up) Loved this chapter too. I love it when book!Yero wins arguements. He just seems so inclined to lose. I wish I had more to say, but I really don´t

AMAZING I love the image of Yero being all fatherly, dont know why, it just suits the character... anyhu Am officially in love with this =]

*takes a nice agnostic cookie, even though she celebrates Christmas, mostly because she has all of her life and sees no reason to not enjoy a holiday that encourages doing something nice for loved ones*

Ahem. OK, I love it. And really want more. And more... and loved the reference to Idina's music. It made me giggle.

xoxox
Tiggy

for some reason thats made me sad... but another amazing chapter =]