Interesting story.

The pred speaking French has to be the most awesome thing I've seen in this section for a while. :'D You're officially my favourite online person.

Great chap!Like the fact that he speaks French,thats new.Interesting that he keeps sticking around with them.Can not wait for the next chap.Hope it is up soon.

Ha, they're lost. Wait, no they are 'inconvenienced.'
This is great, am enjoying it very much.
I have no problem with you killing all the men.
I thought both parties attacking the vegetation, the nightmare, getting sunburned and attacked by bugs were all pretty funny.
The fact that you had the Pred speak French must have been divinely inspired. But, if I was Grace, I wouldn't be that positive that the Pred didn't know any English. They're not stupid, and having basic knowledge of the hunting terrain and 'animal language' would be something they would prepare for.
Great description - "palms were as white as salt".
I kind of guessed about the necklace in chap 4, and I did think it was clever. No complaints from me.

Using French was a great idea! I think it suits him more than suddenly knowing English. Yes, the necklace was great, too! ^_^ I am loving this!

wow. i think i busted my gut laughing when he responded in french. now that was priceless. good job. awesome chapter. keep up the good work. update soon please.

What happens next? Must read the next chapter! ^_^

Wow! This is a cool story - I love the character interaction and especially Grace's randomness. My other favourite thing is that you are writing a cast of characters where the main characters aren't the only ones who seem 'whole' and detailed - too many writers leave their minors as just low quality throw-aways.

Good stuff, I eagerly await the further amusing adventures :D
Muffing

PS. to make this a useful review (other than just for fluffing up your writers ego) I will mention that I noticed two or three little typos somewhere in there ;) That's basically all.

I love this story ! You're not glamourising the characters at all! They're clumsy, extensively nervous around those they have a crush on. Just like in real life. Update soon!

Great chap.Can not wait for the next chap to find out what will happen next,now that they are face to face.It should be interesting.

Woah, descriptive nightmare! Those're some interesting images to picture...

So is James dead? :( Excuse me for being an idiot.

Once again, you leave me craving desperately for moar story!

i don't know if i should pity the predator's sanity or laugh at him. i wonder if he's gonna regret following them. awesome chapter. keep up the good work. update soon please.

OH GOD, JEWFRO, YES! And I thought it wasn't possible to love you much more than I already do! :D

This could be a movie. I'm in awe. Can't wait for the next update!

Well, I'm officially in love with this story. Gotta say I adore your characters so far! Your writing style is awesome.

Also the dig about teenage vampire romances won you many points, hehe. xDD

you're gonna kill all the men huh? please let griffith live. i'd hate to see him die. awesome chapter. keep up the good work. update soon please.