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Imprisoned Inside
2008-12-12 . chapter 1
Aw!
Sweet!
Scary nightmares though!
Buh-bye
xSTICKYxNOTEx
2008-11-28 . chapter 1
wow i totally meant to read/review this earlier i swear but... yeah. i didn't. oops.

but i did now!! and it was a really great story!! i loved it. the end was super cute
Tomoyo Kinomoto
2008-11-22 . chapter 1
AW! Poor Taruto!

This is really well written. Nice job! You messed up your plurals a couple of times, but nothing mager, and you said "lines of lines" instead of "lines of light."

Will you write a sequel about when Deep Blue really DOES emurge? *grins*
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