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kessi
2009-11-11 . chapter 11
All three of them took off after her immediately, Harry in the lead.

“Hermione!”

“’Mione!”

“Herm-o-ninny!”

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omg hahahah i died just there. loved hr/c scene at the end. they really could have been fantastic together in the canon too. i just can picture them even though they hardly exchange a word.
kessi
2009-11-11 . chapter 10
haha i really love the way the story's going. and love the sort of complicated teenage love triangles lol. and i actually like hermione is going to the ball with krum. i always liked krum's character in the books coz he had wisdom enough not to have shallow taste on girls lol.

and the scene where hermione chose her dress robe and realize she's grown was lovely. <3
kessi
2009-11-11 . chapter 9
ooh! i love possessive harry! he's so hilarious and cute in your story i wouldn't mind if there is a bit hr/h.
kessi
2009-11-11 . chapter 8
omg! i don't know how i could miss such a good hr/c story like this! i've been reading from the firt chapter non stop. it was so interesting that i couldn't even stop a second to submit reviews though i wanted to chapter by chapter.

i really like how you interweave this with the original hp plot so fluently and how you are developing hermione and cedric smoothly never forgetting her other best friends. i love hermione and cedric's plot, but i also love hermione and harry's friendship. it was really adorable how harry has grudge on cedric on behalf of hermione. even ron's rather annoying child-like attitude was cute teehee.

not to mention how i love the fact you keep hermione from being just everybody's doormat. and the hogwarts' hearttrob cedric's a little jealousy is a big bonus to me.:)

gotta go read the next chaps!
That Ella Loves
2009-11-09 . chapter 15
Major good luck!
I'm shocked you're having it all so soon!
I've only got my mocks this month!
GOOD LUCK and have an AWESOME time at prom =D
buznuz1
2009-11-06 . chapter 15
I LOVED READING THIS! im so happy that he decided to take hermione, i have read too many stories in which just because he felt he had to he took Cho insteead, so thank u for finnaly writing a reliestic version of events (lol ;P), i can't wait till the 20th, review u then,

ur #1 Fan buznuz1
spike2151
2009-10-29 . chapter 15
Thanks for the note. And just so you know, I'll be patiently waiting for you to return... (well... maybe not that patiently...haha)

Good luck with everything!

:)
ChamberlinofMusic
2009-10-27 . chapter 15
Thanks for the note!
PiecesHateScorpios
2009-10-24 . chapter 15
ooh, This is one VERY good story! I love it! I really really like the friendship/bond/thing that Cedric and Hermione have. It's pretty sweet. Also, hating Rita and Cho really badly right now.

Good job with writing such a wonderful story!

And good luck with your exams. And prom!
PHS
shygirl135
2009-10-24 . chapter 15
ugh you got me all excited again!
but i will wait patiently for your next chapter... i have no choice lol.
good luck on your "OWLS";)
NicolasaMaria
2009-10-23 . chapter 14
This is amazing!
And I'm happy that it is the first Hermione/Cedric story I've ever read.
I don't know how the others will compare.
Please update soon! (:
spike2151
2009-10-22 . chapter 1
Please update soon... please... please... :)

This is really good!
Belle86
2009-10-14 . chapter 14
An interesting story I must say. And just what is up with Harry?? I thought maybe he was just jealous of Cedric taking his place as Hermione's best friend but now he's acting as if he likes her. AND WHY has he not done anything about lying to Cedric about dating Hermione? It's HIS fault things excalated (did i spell that right?)! To quote Hermione, "BOYS ARE SO STUPID!"
WickedSoulx
2009-10-09 . chapter 14
I am in love with this story. I literally disregarded everything I've had to do today just to read through the entire thing so far. Hope you update soon. Loving the Cedric/Hermione interaction and the kissing bit in the bathroom. SO sweet!
alliekiwi
2009-10-01 . chapter 14
Ooh, that's fabulous. Cho isn't going to be any happier than before about this turn of events!!
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