> The elder Uchiha was barely visible from behind a huge pile of papers scattered chaotically all over it.

LOL I bet it's a real killer for him XD; Poor boy.

> Itachi said, flashing Naruto a killing glance.

And were are the famous Uchiha's glares? XD Oh wait... I forgot XD It's his brother that is the expert in the area XD

> “You mean your little trip to Asagiri and the part you played in it?” Naruto winced, causing Uchiha to chuckle. “No, he didn’t. But your face just did.”

That's what I always loved about him - he seems to know everything and read in other people’s minds like in an open book *__*

LOL I was sure he snatched the book from Kakashi's desk XD

> “Right,” he said, if a tad peevishly. “But don’t expect me to call you Itachi-nii-chan!”

I think that it would kill even Itachi .__.

> “Oi, how old are you?” the voice asked gruffly. “I’m not going to jail for corruption of minors, or whatever it is that they wanna fit me up, again!”

LOL And here we have canon Jiraiya who turned Naruto in a bet reader XD

> Cleaning out the bathroom that hadn’t been cleaned for ages!..

Howl's Moving Castle? XD

> Could Itachi’s death have been… a mistake?

Good question indeed >.>;

> Itachi was dead, and it was up to him to keep this man from dying again in this world.

At least one person doing and thinking right thing.

Sorry that I'm so late, honey D: It almost slipped my mind in the end. Great chapter, Itachi rules *__*

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I LOVE YOU. I DO. I REALLY, REALLY DO. AND I WANT AWKWARD NARU/SASU CONVO. XD

Is it weird that I love all of the characters in the original universe and the AU except for the AU Naruto? Huh, anyway, I love reading about Itachi! I wish he would've lived! Your parallel universe is really cool!

Beans

omg! i was so happy for the update! it was kinda of everywhere with naruto wandering from person to person so fast but it fits him perfectly. i've always loved itachi, the myrtar (crap can't spell it!) whatever, anyway, i love him even more but sasuke needs to get his head out of his brooding self and talk to naruto. there's so much going on and i love it! XD can't wait for more!

I love this story so much! It's so well written. I'm addicted. I keep thinking about what'll happen if Naruto loves both Sasukes. What will he do? Ugh it's driving me crazy.

*blink* Ratting anyone out is extremely unlike Naruto... Why would he suddenly do that?

I seriously love this fic, my god-so much drama and tension. It makes me happy how your making all the character who died in Naruto's world alive. I even like Dosu, Zaku, and Kin here.
Naruto thinking about Itachi's confrontation in his world was very awesome. I remembered reading that chapter and I was thinking that there was much more to Itachi than just a killer. ;] I like how everything is slowly coming to piece, Naruto struggling to get back home.
AND THE IDEA ABOUT SHARINGAN. That's awesome! But I find it inevitable that Sasuke will somehow find it and use it. I really hope to god you don't kill off Itachi though. D:>

Good chapter!

A lot happening.

Naruto is still going out with Sakura! Well, I guess he's confused.

Keep up the good work!!

this fic seriously does not have the amount of reviews it deserves, i mean, it's like so well written compared to most things i've seen on this site, IT DESERVES MOAR!!1

and oh, i love how you've written itachi, and for that brief moment, kakashi, m (rofl). not to mention the ero-sennin part, i cried. (like seriously kishi kills jiraiya but lets sasuke face off all the kage -sans one- and is still alive? fudging fudgecakes)

can't wait for more. :-)

AH I love this story SO interesting. I stopped following Naruto long ago and I still read this. MORE PLEASE

Ah, bummer, I keep forgetting what's going on :D I remember that Sasuke and Naruto went to some town to exterminate this demon, smut and all, but I can't remember the things before then :D I'll have to reread this, AGAIN, sometime later :P when I remember even less, for it to be even more interesting XD

This is actually a review for all the ten chapters...
This is my favorite story right now! I like how you made the pilot naruto more self-serving than the current naruto... but I guess he's getting attatched to sasuke too?... Anyways, my favorite scene has to be where pilot Naruto's trying to get Sasuke free just so he can beat him up, right after Sasuke freed him... and oh my god, the whole thing was just great- that rap was hilarious! Its been a long time since a fanfiction felt so fun and original and actually made be laugh! I love Killer Bee.
And I loved how you described the date scenes with Sakura, those were cute, and felt pretty magical, actually, I could feel the air of first love... I liked how instead of just bypassing Naruto's attraction to Sakura like most authors you included it... and I was happy for Naruto. Poor guy, after so much hardship, gets a girlfriend! and she is a good girl if not for her Sasuke obsession, and i guess in this world where hes a demon hunter thats not happening.
And the descriptions you used when describing the sasunaru sex scene, about how the elements were clashing and making new colors on the wall, that felt pretty magical too.
I feel kind of worried that Naruto's getting mixed up with Sasuke again though in the pilot world... Sasuke is just so troubled, I don't see if that can last. And technically was he cheating on Sakura? And does SAsuke like Naruto? Is that why he was watching him from his window? Or does he just spontaneously get stalker friends and then decided to jump them? But yeah...
I love this story and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

How the heck do you keep up with the details?

I love everyone in this, I've always loved stories that go back and forth between alternate versions of characters.

I also love how you've done the relationships between Naruto and Sasuke. It makes a lot more sense when it's not rushed, you know?

> So your friend is a pig-headed jerk who is neck-deep in the mess he’s made himself

wow... That was... strong XD Somebody had to tell the truth sooner or later XD

> Honestly, sometimes I think I should just perform a striptease right under his nose, but he wouldn’t notice that anyway!

LOL Poor Karin. But she's right. Long time ago, except for seeking a revenge, Sasuke also thought about rebuilding the clan. Like hell he'll do it if he's that interested in women ^^;

> “You know,” he began carefully, “most people don’t have an option of crashing an entire village to release their frustration. So they just go for the trivial. They go and get drunk. I’ve never been drunk.”

I wonder who provided him with that misleading information ^^;

Anyway... I think that I like canon Naruto more. He's more... vivid. It's like comparing two pictures - one with bright and vivid colours and the other one, that is faded. Sasuke, however, is surprisingly similar in his both versions.

I like how you've integrated pilot!Naruto and canon!Naruto; it's a unique idea, and I've always been interested in the pilot world. However, the SasuNaru portion of it feels too constructed for my tastes; Sakura, for her part, is too flat. Why have a relationship with her at all? She'd be much more likely to notice that Naruto isn't Naruto than Sasuke, after all.