ohshitt.
i just read the chapter.
last line left me wanting more haha
i cant wait to get back to writing.
i miss it and i need an outlet.
we have to revert back to brainstorming and scenes.
its turning out amazing:]
you should be proudd<3
xoxo
D'

Oh! I absolutely love it! Not like I expected anything different, after all. I loved the first one, so I knew I'd love this one too. =]

So far, I've caught three pop-culture references (or at least I'm calling them that). The first one, I'm not sure if many others would catch it, but there's only one place that I've seen that particular version of Miss Mary Mack. The second one, if anyone read close enough, it would be obvious. After all, it's rather obvious. And the third, well, to me, it was obvious at least. One of my favorite Hobbit songs, really. =]

Can't wait for the next chapter!! -is very excited-

nice update =)
not gonna lie though, i was a bit confused at first. i should probably go and read or at least skim the previous chapters, but for the most part i think i figured out what's going on. i guess we'll see if that's true with the next update! lol
~ml

My my, Ms Lace! I see that my poking and prodding has worked! Haha. I'm taking way to much credit with that statement, I'm sure. But still. *wink* I am most certainly glad for the update! I have missed reading about these boys of yours.

Random, but I gotta say that I like your new profile. It is pretty wicked ;) I saw that you got a new beta, but, you know, if you ever want another I'm definatly up for that job! :D I would be very honored.

*gasp* So Ry's baby is going to die?! That is so terribly sad! (Well... If I'm getting the right impression off of this, anyway...)

You know, I noticed that this chapter has took on much more of the role of a narrator. It almost seems as if this is, say, grandma telling a story to her grandchild before she goes to bed *assuming that this child can ignore all of the mature content, anyway ;)*

Ha, that amused me so much how Reids mom told him to grow a pair. I laughed out loud at that, I will admit it. It kinda reminds me of my friends mom, actually. :D And Reid's worried about Tyler getting kidnapped? That was kinda interesting...

I liked the bit of rambling around the middle, where you are talking, saying that they really don't know what to do because they deserve easy but easy seems weird, but they don't want to make it more difficult... it is a very profound part of this story!

Loved it as always.

MJ4

PS, what ever ended up really happening to all the Black Widows?

Holy cow. Intense. First u thought it was in ry's pov but then I thought maybe it's Reid lol. Anyway I obviously read the chapter but I most likely wouldn't be able to finish considering me being in the airport and all hahha. Catch you soon!

You could bitch and whine about how incredibly late this review is...I meant to review this when it first landed in my inbox, I'm sure, but...Heh...

This is fantastic...

~Fay~

Ah, so the boys have inspired you again! :) Yay!

Okay, so starting at the top:

I totally know what Ry' means when she says that she wants to go back to how it was before. She feels that her world would be better because the bad crap wouldn't happen. But how do you know they wouldn't? That, I believe is the age old question. You better not have him break up with her again because he thinks that some other guy that hits on her at Spenser will be better for her or something...

Ah, Reid. I'm not exactly sure if I should call him dumb or thoughtful. However, I do think that he should've gone to see Ryanne a bit sooner, ya know? What if she would've been all like "NOO! It has been to long. The blood on your hands is now stuck there!" That would've been bad... However, when you think of her past, and all the killings and stuff that Jace must've done in his little gang, you kinda have to wonder what she really did think about him killing Chase. Would it really even phase her?

Most of all, I love how they apologize, if you want to call it that. How they just see eachother, and everything is better between them, or what-not. You can tell by that that they do love eachother, so much...

And, overall there was amazing description in there! The chapter had very little actual dialogue, but still everything that needed to be said was said.

Loved it! :)

Music.Junkie4 ^_^

it did take a long time, but i'm a forgiving person :) not to mention that it was a great chapter, so i forgot about being mad, lol
i'm so excited for more - i really really really love this story, i don't know what else i can say!
more? :)
~ml

So glad they are finally free, i couldn't cope with the stress anymore! :)

it was a good sweet chapter... i thought it was gonna end badly actually.

I'm glad Ryanne and Reid worked it out, hopefully it will stay that way but who knows with those two besides you of course. Can't wait for more.

wow. i cant even begin to tell you how truely amazazing this story is. this chapter literally had me at the edge of my seat, it was so intense. i cant wait until you update!!

Ooh, sorry for the late review! I totally forgot the other day when the chapter came out... and I had too review for you! So I am back. :)

SO, onto the chapter... Molly was a total badass and I love her. She really is so cool! I thought it was kinda funny how she was like, licking blood off of her hand or whatever and telling Ryanne about Chases evil plan. That, was totally cool. And it did make me giggle a bit. haha...

Was Reid not Using Calebs plan? Or what? Anyway, that was a GENIOUS move. :) Who wouldda thunk that Reid could restrain himself? (...well, until he kills Chase, anyway...) The one thing I'mma wondering about though, is how do we know that Chase isn't going to come back, still? He could be all "*poof* I'm not dead anymore! You are so stupid to believe taht you could defeat me! MUAHAHA!" and he would be back. And... yeah. Then Ryanne would be in so much more danger... But, wait, why DID chase go for Reids girl and not Tylers? o.O I feel that you covered this already, but as much as I am racking my brains, I cannot remember! UGH!

Ooh, on another note, I liked teh backstory on the Black Widows. I was so confused when I saw Molly's picture on your profile under that name... but now it makes so much more sense! Muahaha! hahaha... thanks!

And... gotta go. I'm not supposed to be on the computer.. i'm supposed to be cleaning for when my friends come over later... Ooh, and they say hi from last time. :)

Byebye for now!

MJ4

That was a dark chapter, but I felt that it was a good climax to Ryanne being held captive. Chase's evil plan was a good twist in the plot, and I am kinda glad that the final fight between Reid and Chase didn't consist with a bunch of using.

OMG!! so i've got major things to tell you. but ill save those for a PM. some good:] and some..bad:[ but anywhose. ha you have NO idea how much i love molly. haha. when i read that paragraph where she was telling ryanne about chase's plan..i laughed so hard lmao. i know im dumb. but i mad me giggle. these chapters turned out so well, i had to re-read them all. lol. everything really turned out well with Ryanne and now we just have to get her and reid back together and then proceed with..everything. the readers think they've gone through a lot reading this? they havent seen nothin yet lol:} im excited luxxiee!(L) anywayss, ill PM you and we'll talk ideas and who will write what:] love ya luxie (L)

--love, DanielaBear(L)