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...THAT WAS SAD!! D= Very. Sadness keels me. The angst, oh GODLYAYUMU, the ANGST! -dies from the angst of it all-

But, none the less, I did enjoy this and the thought of Hizumi in Gothic Lolita makes me smile. Even though I am gonna cry. Although it's as my teacher says, an author can control the reader's emotions without them even knowing it.

This was very good. =) Thank you for the HizuAyu ficcy! You have inspired me to now make my powers of randomness start working once again.

Thank you for adding one to the fandom!

--Jessica and Zexion

AW HUN! CROSSDRESSING? YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE! this has got to be the best and most delicious little thing i've read lately! well, a bit late, true, but hey, i'm still here reviewing!
so, okay, i was cracking up midway and then it all went grey and so sad!, i couldn't believe it, i mean sure i was starting to see where this was going, but still! it broke my heart... as did that small line mentioning kanone. but i have to say i absolutely loved the 'oh god, i look like rutherford', made me crack up completely! oh, oh, and the 'don't you dare say your my father', that was gold! it's really interesting how you made this go from playful to depressing, nice touch!... i'm speechless. loved it!
adina.

That is so amazingly sweet and the ending actually made me teary eyed for a bit there.

... okay, yeah I just admitted that.

beautiful. I applaud you. Quite literally - for I am applauding as we speak. :)

no this is sad