so cute!

awe that is so sweet i think deep down alot of men feel like they won't be good fathers but man this waas the sweetist marcus/hermione story sorry i mean one-shot that i have ever read!

hey look, u did write his reaction! awesome. luv ur work

Hermione is one lucky lady!

Yup, you are doing a wonderful job with your Hermione/Marcus stories, they are a joy to read:-))

HIHI
it was beautiful!
omg
just
so...
romantic in a diferent way...

i love it!

kisses

great story i got got into this pairing keep it up !

I am also absolutely addicted to these Marcus/Hermione one-shots you keep writing

cute :D, love alot of pairings with hermione in it without ron hehe

Aw, this was very sweet - without being disturbingly sweet.
I really liked it.

Adorable :D
Again, I've never read a Marcus/Hermione before, but I loved it!

LOVE this fic! really sweet and totally realistic. well done!

oh this was really cute!
i absolutely loved it. =)

toodles,
Bubbles

Simply lovely!
x
t.b.

cute!
i like it!