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Reviews for: the Temple on the Mountain
InARealPickle
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
wtf?
Firebird41
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
If I had more time to analyze this I would, because this too is like poetry...just a really odd piece. Still good, though, and it's a nice change from what I usually read.
TheKazz
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
Oh, I really, REALLY liked this. Because of the way your writing flows and how poetic it is, it creates a wonderful mental picture. You write in a way that allows many things to be interpreted differently with different symbolic meanings, but it still all means the same thing in the end. Does that make any sense? xD Sorry. Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this.
daniel-gudman
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
Is this based on the pilot?
murrmernator
2008-11-19 . chapter 1
What?

...I don't get it... I mean, it sounds excellent. But I think I'm just too stupid. Explain?
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