I really liked this story. It was very good. :)

James was a spoiled child.

Powerful story. I liked how things were presaged in it, the defection of Lily, the bitterness he would feel one day. Lovely job.

This is a very good fanfic AND THANK YOU FOR SAYING SNAPE ISN'T SAPPY!

That was good! Poor Snape. I can't believe what he went through or that he didn't got to Hospital Wing sooner. Poor Lily for thinking she gave him a bloody nose. James was a little a rude, pulling Lily out of the room and not asking how Snape was. Good work!

Very poignant. Good work!

That was so heartbreakingly sad because it sounds so like it might have been. No one cared--well, I imagine Poppy did. But Dumbles never did anything, McGonagall let her brats torment him, Lily deserted him for Potter...

Excellent, it would make sense that Snape would have a hard time in a 'pure-blood' dorm.

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really good fic, well written with that. it's really too bad you don't want to write a sequel, it would've been so pleasent to read ^_^

Aw, I LOVED it! & favourited it, too!

Very beautiful characterization of both Snape and Lily.. only it saddened me that she felt obligated to leave with James.. and made me crack up that she herself was the one to break the final straw and send him voluntarily to the Wing.

Great work, it kept me interested throughout. Keep writing!

I enjoyed this story a lot! You did a great job of portraying young Severus... this is exactly how I imagined his school days. I also enjoyed the image of him through Poppy's eyes, great job!

Wow. Great. Poor Severus!! Thank you so much for sharing this.

Brilliant! I love your portrayal of all the characters! I only wish this had the opportunity to blossom into more than just a one shot *hint hint*

sweet. sad