don't delete please

i really love your stories plz keep them up

I say you update, xD

A very well written story. I just LOVED it...=) but plz plz plz PLZ Update this wonderful story!

WHOA!
"goths", "emos", and "punks"
you should have scene kids in there too lol

but great chapter! i like the cat it is so cute!!

but i can't wait until chapter 3 is out yeah!!
update soon!
:]
~Mila

AH! That was good!
(sorry I'm annoymounous *lol i can't spell* because i don't have an account, or i did but lost it)
keep up the good work!
:]
~Mila

excuse me for meh pervertedness but that is just funny...

“Uh, Jenn…” Sango said when she noticed the cat, “I don’t think pets are aloud at school.” Jenn waved the comment away, “Don’t worry about it, Sango-chan, now, I want to invite you two to the ball,” she said excitedly, obviously not noticing Drago there. “Ball?” Miroku asked in confusion, much the same way Kagome had. “I didn’t know they still held balls,” Jenn nodded enthusiastically, “My brothers are holding one, now please say you’ll go!” And then Sango and Miroku feel victim to Jenn’s kitty pout and were powerless to say no. After a few minutes talking about the ball, Jenn finally noticed Drago. “Drago!” She said happily, although somewhat shyly. “Would you like to go to my brothers’ ball?” She asked, still somewhat shy. Drago blushed, something Jenn found adorable and nodded his agreement.


:D im sorry but its just really funny i couldn't stop laughing the whole time :3 ...again sorry for my pervertedness!!

p.s. awsome chapter!! update soon

this is really good when will the next chapter be up i cant wait for the next chapter when will it be up?

Hmm I wonder what will happen next...

this was a great chapter. can't wait to see what will happen next, update soon.

that was awesome i loved itt!!

yay great

Not bad, I like this idea, thought it would be nice if you sepreated your dialogue from your descriptive paragraphs.

Dialogue should have it's own seperate paragraph per person. It gets annoying trying to sort through the long paragraphs and understand what just happened and who said what.

Also, these two first chapters could have been one solid chapter. Each chapter should have one solid main point that flows through them.

Also, please, any comments that you wish to make, leave them for an author's note at the end, they're distracting while we're reading.

Other than that, not bad. I like this idea very much...I've always been a fan of bookish Kagome and Sesshomaru in a High school setting. Please update soon.

Hey no fair ...Please It really good. I'm not good at constructive critism but i think you're doing Koolio. I wish i could keep reveiwing but i can't. Keep up the good work..
SW09
Thx for the dedicate
Update soon.

great story that you got going here, i can't wait to see what happens next so update soon.