plz fin. this story so i wont cry!

Fantastic writing style. Loving the story!

Dang, it's been months. Well, good job. Edward's being a...*censored*

Eminnis and Alicia

hahahhahahahaha

rose go die in a corner...i never liked emmett or rose, so take that rose...

mwahahahahaha

liked the chapter update soon

haha i love it :D so awesome!

Amazing, I loved it. I thought it was a very interesting idea to go about and search his head, there were certain parts with things I'd change, simply because of my own vision and personal preference, such as "At least in school one learnt something new every day. It was the old routine of, 'Oh, excuse me, sir,' and 'I'm sorry ma'am,' in a deep southern voice." I would've probably said something along the lines of "At least in my old life, I had school, and although the material was repetitive, there were times I would learn something from it. But this life had the same old routine of, 'Oh, excuse me, sir,' and 'I'm sorry, ma'am,", while in my mind I knew of what I would do to them." But, other than a few of my little peeves, it was great.

i love it... cant wait to read whats next! but i noticed a small detail that's kinda off.. after the three years when he gets bored and kills that man... his daughter is 3 months old and his wife is months pregnant... i know it could happen but when i was reading it, i thought about it and it felt weird! but i love the story.. and i love your writing style.. marry xmas :)

As my Christmas is winding up, I think I'll make your Christmas by reviewing. So, Merry Christmas!

This is pretty good. Well done! I liked how you've handled his time away from his family. You did it really well.

Can't wait for the next chapter,

Free To Imagine

Aw, man. He's leaving. :( I knew he would, but it's still sad. I'm excited to see what comes next. :)

You really do a good job of Edward's perception of Esme. Hi character is written really well. Good job! Update soon! I'll sit right here until you do. *sits down* *shifty eyes* I don't sleep, I'm a vampire. :-)

Great as always dear, can't wait to hear your spin on Edward's rebellious years, I have my own ideas how they were, and I'm curious to see what will happen when you take them over. You gave me an idea, but I shall keep it to myself, because that would be ripping you off slightly.

This story is amazing

Oh, Esme. This is getting even better! Please update soon? You're awesome. :) I think you write really well in Edward's point of view.

Aw, he's discovering his power. I like this story. :)

Oh my goodness. I'm so excited. Newborn Edward! This is going to be interesting. :)