Oh man. A fake optimus Prime. I can't wait to see who it truly is underneth the fakeness. I just can't wait for the next chapter and the ones for jungle planet.

C.D.

O O
o


What's gunna happen!? are they gunna be alright!? Oh poor Blurr, Shotimus and Jetfire!

Update soon please?! I wanna know what happens next!

Well, this was a treat to come home to!

Oh, boy, this doesn't look good at all for them. Glad to know they're both alive and well though. Nice thinking on Shotimus' part, even if it didn't work out; guess all that time with Red Alert paid off. And ouch, I feel sorry for Blurr right now.

Hope Jetfire or the rest of the Autobots find them soon; looks like they're going to need it, if that description is anything to go by. If only they knew.

I'm going to take a wild guess and say that thing is ready to stir up trouble in the ranks by being a miraculously revived Optimus Prime. Either way, the suspense level has definitely just been upped. Go get them, Scavenger, Red Alert! I guess a little shot or two at Megatron and company along the way couldn't hurt, either. xD

Nice job on the writing; I think the only occasional problem I see is mainly the switching of present tense to past tense sometimes. Other than that, awesome job, and can't wait for the next update. :D

Oh me likie. Want more goodness. And maybe ya can use my TF OC's (If you want that is). Look at them at my TF OC forum.

C.D.

Who ho! Another awsome chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep on the writing and write some more chapters before we all die. Your lovely audience is waiting for your awsomeness.

C.D.

Aw, you almost made me cry, here... Normally I would review the last chapter poster for a story that I read, but I couldn't resist for that one^^

You may have gave an idea of my own whit this too...

It is good that Shotimus still sees Sideswipe as his brother and that brothers are there for each other as always.

Don't worry about those that tell you to hurry up with your stories. All of us have other things to do, other interests, etc, not just the stories alone. I do understand that you are working on mulitple stories at the same time (as do I). They are your stories, you write them when it fits your schedule.

No, this chapter didn't suck. It was good.

C.D.

Yes I'm woundering who is on the Decepticon ship. Now who is the dude that was yellow and blue? Damn it I should've asked for the Transformers series for Christmas so I could've known who it was. Damn show bieng over 3-4 years old.

C.D.

Love the idea of either a clone Star Saber mini cons or even Shotimus. Can't wait to see that happen.

Hey didn't ya say that when ya get to like chapter 30-35 on your other fics that you were going to put a new chapter on this one? And one my topic on your TF Forum I don't know if ya didn't get this but I said that you could use my characters in your fic.

C.D.

I think that they're going to have the Star Saber for the rest of the story. And I think that Shotimus is starting to doubt himself. Probably because he still blames himself at the very back of his mind tat it was his foult that Optimus died on that mission with Megatron. And Megatron would have a harder time with the Autobots now then when Optimus was alive. And no Megatron won't be able to get the Star Saber back. I think that Shotimus will be less of a hot head then he was before he accepted the Matrix of Leadership. And if he does try to get it back he'll probably have Shotimus in a critical state or something. And your right we'll never know till the next chapter comes out. Until then, nice story, keep it up, your audience is waiting, and good luck writing the next chapter.

C.D.

Like the name. Ya kept it as close to his true name as ya could. I like it. Keep it up. Your audience awaits.

C.D.

Shizu likes. Shizu want more godnes. More goodness please.

C.D.