NO ZAKIRA-SAMA! nice story, hope ya do more

ooh drama lol, great chap again (dont over work urself)

TOTO! OMFG XD great chap

wow 2 chaps in 1 day XD anyway didnt see that coming, (i should really stop saying anyway)

lol Zakira is so clever XD anyway great chap.

sorry it took a while to review, but great chap. and Kuroi Shinigami's new deck is awsome (just like his others)

O_o Kokujo is scary. But cool ^^

Oh... I wanted to comment about how I love the O rly owl in the last chapter but I was too shocked (not that it was a nasty shock xD) to remember that. So now, I LOVE THE O RLY OWL XD

OMG O_o I never ever ever ever ever ever thought of this pairing before O_o Wow...

What a duel O_o nice chapter :D btw 'shure' should be 'sure'. Or are you typing it like that on purpose? xD

wow. that was intense lol. anyway im glad Tody won (btw is tody even a real name)

so far it seems your stories ending soon while mines gonna take a while to finish (ill probably have 32-50 chapters)

chapter 3 scared me :( but atleast chapter 4 was good poor bura. it's weird i was thinking of introducing Bura in an orphanage

wow kokujo's duel with Toto was a alot like the on in the series :p anyway cant wait chapter 3

very good story glad that people havent forgot about jamira :D

-Metallicraft

woot! that was great. one prob though, i know i asked you before but *WHY THE HELL DOES KO CAST SUPER SPARK!?* yep you told me that he had light in his deck, but the image was all wrong :P but anyways, still love the o rly owl and god i laughed so hard at the part with Zakira having a bubble bath xD