|Reviews for Holding Out For You|
| PinkDrink 11/20/08 . chapter 1
lol sounds like it will be good... But you should have given the first two chapter's lol just to be nice lol no CAN"T wait to see where this goes later!
| NoLongerAnAccount00 11/20/08 . chapter 1
Ugh. you cant write this good and not have hte next chapter ready! :P (says the girl who hasnt updated her story in forever) lol but really i cant wait for this story to get rolling! :D
| Twlightforever 11/20/08 . chapter 1
I like this story too. You are a great writer
| cshorte 11/20/08 . chapter 1
I can't wait to read more!
| Zoey Redbird 11/20/08 . chapter 1
good story! love the realisticness hahah
| TakeOut 11/20/08 . chapter 1
Great start. I think this is going to be a really good story. And dog ADHD moments, my bernese mountain dog starts bouncing round all over the place. x
| Tvnut loves Jax Teller 11/20/08 . chapter 1
im definetly intrigued
| eternal.loves.destiny 11/20/08 . chapter 1
i'm feeding your addiction! haha, anyway, i was just reading your recent update of lady of the night when i read the author's note at the bottom that said that you had a new story, so i read the summary, and i was like 'holy hell, well this sounds interesting!' hahaha, anyway, i read the first chapter and i love it already, along with lady of the night, and i absolutely love fanfics in general that have bella and edward as single parents and then they meet each other and the hole shebang and whatnot, so anyway, enough of my rambling, love the stories, and cant wait for the next update to both of those stories!
| kirster226 11/20/08 . chapter 1
I'm excited about this new story. Please update soon. I can't wait for the coming chapters.
| Dolphingirl0206 11/20/08 . chapter 1
Haha, this story looks like it's going be another good one! I think your the first author, that I've read, to make Bella a marine biologist, which I love because I'm a dork and in school right now trying to get my degree in marine biology.
Keep up the awesome work!
| booksickle 11/20/08 . chapter 1
Wah. I don't wanna wait.
| I like men with no men boobs 11/20/08 . chapter 1
great story i love it so far, update more whenever you have time.
| ZeppoGrl7 11/20/08 . chapter 1
awesome first chapter :) looks like im gonna enjoy this fic a lot too! :D cant wait for the next update.
| Nessa19 11/20/08 . chapter 1
new story yey i like were this is going sounds good :D update soon!
| Ksangi 11/20/08 . chapter 1
Two years ago we spent a week in San Francisco. We took the Gray Line tour down the Pacific Coast Highway to Monterey and Carmel. We stopped at Monterey Bay Aquarium and almost missed the bus because the aquarium was so wonderful we wanted to make sure we saw EVERYTHING. I was transfixed by the tidal pool right outside the cafeteria. Carmel was cute. We were dropped off at a mall of all things. So being the intrepid travelers we are we took ourselves on a little tour of the town. It's the kind of place that seems to dissappear in a magical mist at night only to reemerge when the sun rises.