really good maybe you can get the dough boys to get back and try to make johnny kill devi agian.

your a grate writer I love your stories

i think you should continue this story. but you should use your own ideas and not write it how other people tell you. if you do that then its their work not your's. i'd like to see how you'd finish it (or continue it). it's more fun to see how specific writers write things differently in their own style. id really like to read more of this fic. please continue it.

Yay! My hapiness returns and I do that smiley thing w/ my face! I liked this. EVen those it's JTHM, I relish a happy ending. :)

BLING BLING!

Aw, I love NNy romances! (As long as they're not guy/guy, ick.)

OOO I like I like! I'm getting around to reading all of your stories, hehe you'll hafta 'scuse me, you know how slow I read hehehe. Well so far this one was good ::Others look at him with angry 'I'ma kick ur ass' looks::...ok it was great ::They keep looking. Falls to the floor and curls up in the fetal position::...leave me alone,...okay okay it was excellent. HEE! Oi please disregard that. Well I hope to read more. Bye.

That was nice and sweet (jeez jhonen might not I ve like It). But I liked it anyway good work.

First, I'd just like to say that I've read most of your work, and find them all exceptional. Mabey I'm just the mushy type, but I like fics where Johnny C. and Devi D. Interact. It's interesting because they both got along so well. Untill the whole attempted murder thing :Þ. Here are some suggestions for another story (I don't usually do this, but since you asked so nicely) you could write a sequel where they attempt a second date and he is able to explain why he tried to kill her. And/Or you could make then share stories of their simmilar "voices" (ie sickness, , Psycho Doughboy, and Rev. Meet)

This is soooooo adorable... I LOVE YOU (hits self in the head with a shoe) ignore that.

Oh pleeeeease write more, it's so super-cute. .

::clap claps:: i like it!

OH PLEASE! PLEASE CONTINUE! *falls on knees and bursts into tears* "emily, i'm home! i bought some chocolate flavored toothpaste!" ::emily was never seen again..EVER!::

Your storys are BRAIN CANDY! MAKE MORE DAMN IT!

So goood! It's a lot better than the Nny/Devi story I wrote T_T But I love it, it's very sweet _

this was the first nny and devi fic that