... I don't know how to start this... it was good I'll admit. but kill him? I didn't expect that... but it went well, you worked around the difference and made it work. you are truely a good athor.

I started to watch How I Met Your Mother just because of this fic. Well, I mean Neil played a part in that as well, but this fic made me actually decide to go watch right then..

Anyways.

Love the story, but wanted to comment that the last line of this chapter doesn't really mesh with the previous paragraph. He's sighing like an emo kid, and then suddenly is smirking, new personality in place? It's really abrupt to read. Maybe a little more of some sort of thought process, about what kind of person this new Him will be?

~Secca

Oh my god this is the best thing ever. I haven't even seen How I Met Your Mother and it's amazing anyways oh my GOD. augh.

It's totally amazing and had the absolute touch that Doctor Horrible has and augh. Going to see if the sequel is up yet because I really want to read it now. ^^

Aw, that was a nice farewell address.

Oh no!

Wow, quite a turn of fate for him to grab the wrong gun.

He gets good marks for crowd control.

Yeah, short.

Nice and dramatic.

Yay for him getting his mojo back.

Corporate tool indeed.

Good job with all that guilt.

Good act.

Whoa, I wasn't expecting that.

Good job showing him slipping.