 kari910 2009-06-12 . chapter 22... I don't know how to start this... it was good I'll admit. but kill him? I didn't expect that... but it went well, you worked around the difference and made it work. you are truely a good athor. |
 Secca Irises 2009-05-29 . chapter 1I started to watch How I Met Your Mother just because of this fic. Well, I mean Neil played a part in that as well, but this fic made me actually decide to go watch right then..
Anyways.
Love the story, but wanted to comment that the last line of this chapter doesn't really mesh with the previous paragraph. He's sighing like an emo kid, and then suddenly is smirking, new personality in place? It's really abrupt to read. Maybe a little more of some sort of thought process, about what kind of person this new Him will be?
~Secca |
 Secca Irises 2009-05-26 . chapter 22Oh my god this is the best thing ever. I haven't even seen How I Met Your Mother and it's amazing anyways oh my GOD. augh.
It's totally amazing and had the absolute touch that Doctor Horrible has and augh. Going to see if the sequel is up yet because I really want to read it now. ^^ |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 21Aw, that was a nice farewell address. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 20Oh no! |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 19Wow, quite a turn of fate for him to grab the wrong gun. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 18He gets good marks for crowd control. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 17Yeah, short. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 16Nice and dramatic. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 15Yay for him getting his mojo back. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 14Corporate tool indeed. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 13Good job with all that guilt. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 12Good act. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 11Whoa, I wasn't expecting that. |
 Fire From Above 2009-03-31 . chapter 10Good job showing him slipping. |