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TheDancingKiller
2009-11-12 . chapter 6
oh my! this is wonderful...I hope you finish this one too!
Cassandra30
2009-11-06 . chapter 6
I like this one very much. I am looking forward to reading more of it soon.
Cassandra30
2009-11-06 . chapter 5
Sounds like Harry and Sev had fun!
Cassandra30
2009-11-06 . chapter 4
Nicely worked out.
Cassandra30
2009-11-06 . chapter 3
Well done and well handled! Poor Severus. Maybe this will help him recover from his first childhood.
Cassandra30
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
Most excellent chapter. Love this story!
Cassandra30
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
DumDum was a fool as usual. Nobody knows better than he does. He never listens to what anyone else says. He is a naive trusting idiot with delusions of godhood!
Griffin Raven
2009-10-24 . chapter 6
I absolutely love deaging stories particularlty Severus or Harry. Brilliant the way your exploring and adding depth and understanding to Severus and Albus' relationship. It was also a nice touch with Albus getting a house elf take little Sev to the Dursleys. I don't think Harry ever really told anyone exactly what he went through whilst he lived with his relatives at privet drive. I think the key part to me was when Albus asked if Harry had seen/or spoken to his relatives recently; Harry replied when he last spoke to Molly and Arthur, and had seen either Hermione or Ron. It was this statement alone that brough Albus up short, in the simpliest way that Harry didn't consider Petunia and Vernon Dursley "his relatives".
Athena Keating-Thomas
2009-10-19 . chapter 6
Heh. What a sight that was; the bicycle trip to Hogsmeade is emblazoned in my brain. ;) A very cute story thus far. I hope you find the inclination to continue so we can see the eventual reaction of the possible re-aging...
SlyPuff RavenDor
2009-10-13 . chapter 6
This story is awesome!! Please update soon! :)
Kage Hasu
2009-09-07 . chapter 6
So how many chapters do you have planned for Snape to remain four?
Twinkie
2009-08-05 . chapter 6
I like the story, but I feel like if Albus had discovered exactly how horribly the Dursleys were to Severus, who was only with them for a short amount of time, it'd seem more realistic if he realized the damage it had done to Harry to suffer that for ten years not knowing of magic, or why he was being punished plus another six or seven years with them. It also would have seemed more realistic if it explain why Harry immediately called Severus "Sev" instead of just Severus. Were they allies, friends even before the explosion? You should probably explain their relationship more thoroughly. Just a note, this is NOT a flame, this is constructive criticism. Some people can get those two confused.
Saucepan
2009-08-03 . chapter 2
Alright, I realize this is one of those things written as a joke and for fuzzy-wuzzies, but aren't they even trying to find out what happened so they can undo it? If a few weeks hasn't worn it off, it's not like it's likely to be contingent on components that'll pass through the body...though since the accident was a potions EXPLOSION we don't even know if it was contact or vapor or some kind of accidental ingestion or...dah! Must stop unnecessary thinking!
MaeSilverpaws1
2009-07-26 . chapter 6
interesting story line.. I am not a Snape fan but i do like little Snape so when he "grows up" will he be an arse again?
Rori Potter
2009-07-25 . chapter 6
That was so awesome. Update soon.
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