Hmm...well that was interesting. Honestly I was slightly confused when you dropped the reverse Star Wars line ("DG I'm not your father.") but it definately came together in the end. And I like the way you tied Ahamo and Cain together. Not something I would have done.

Run to Cain, hug him hard, and never let him go, DG! Then talk to him. Even if he just wants to be friends, he will have no issues shooting creepy!Ahamo. If anything, it'll be the excuse he's been waiting for since the Realm of the Unwanted.

Now that creepy!Ahamo has been brought up by the fandom, I can't ignore it. But I am curious as to who DG and Azkadellia's father really is. And what kind of relationship does he have with Az under your take?

One nit: it was Tutor who said Ahamo was her father. It's possible Glitch said something about it later, but he stayed pretty mum on that issue during the miniseries. And if anybody could unravel this tangled web of political intrigue and romance, it would be Ambrose. I doubt Ambrose is fooled by anyone.